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Baby Blue Eyes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
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Keats Sonnet You are my love, my baby blue eyes Your eyes reflect the sky, heavenly blue Ripples of the sea, sparkling in the sun Two Pools of heaven, reflecting my sighs Two loving wildflowers, blooming anew Flirting in the sunshine, of kindled heat Your loving eyes, fill me with passion Whispers in the wind, lifts to new highs Lifting spirits, above earths bronze hue My baby blue eyes, our love we have spun Into a circle, so loving and sweet In valleys, meadows, and ocean shores Your voice a wind song, to every heartbeat In the sun or the rain, it is you I adore A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful words, Victoria... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A lovely Keats Sonnet Victoria. I have always enjoyed this sonnet form. You do this soooo well. Hugs, D |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you very much Balledeer and Gentle Spirit..appreciate you kind comments..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
As always, something beautifully said and penned. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
As always, something beautifully said and penned. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
As always, something beautifully said and penned. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Victoria! Denise |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Lovely, beautiful....just like the person from whose pen these words come I love your poetry!!!!Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Ron..thank you Ron..and for those three lovely responses above..dont feel bad i gave elizabeth four..haa.. Denise..Thank you Denise..i finally got thru to Passions..a very busy night tonight on here.. Peppermint..Thank you for those very kind words Peppermint. very nice of you to say. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Your voice a wind song, to every heartbeat In the sun or the rain, it is you I adore Now just how lovely is this? Another excellent blending of your passions with nature's beauty. Nicely done, Victoria. Robert Joseph [This message has been edited by Robert Joseph (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jamie and Robert..I appreciate you both taking time to read..and for your very kind compliments.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
What a lovely tribute for your love, I really enjoyed reading it, well done. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very well done, Victoria. A beautiful love poem. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love definitely shows here, my friend. Well written and said. jwesley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Charisma..Thank you so much ..I am pleased you enjoyed.. Elizabeth..a distant memory but so glad you enjoyed Elizabeth.. thank youjwewley..its nice when one is inspired by someone special..thank you for peeking in ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw... the beauty of love poems never dies and this one is just like the rest it is beautiful!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much ethome.. nice of you to send it back around again ..glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your voice a wind song, to every heartbeat In the sun or the rain, it is you I adore Loved it, Victoria *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
i've never attempted a Keats sonnet - now i think I will but i'm sure I won't create anything half so good as this |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nakdthoughts..thank you so much..i enjoy your poetry too.. Wil..i challenge you to do one than bill.. i am sure yours will be wonderful,my friend.. thank you for reading ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Victoria a beautiful piece indeed....a very soft and tender sonnet well doneTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much traci..im glad you liked..I appreciate your visit.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Darn ... My eyes are hazel....lol...lovely write from you my friend. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is the color of my eyes Mark..   A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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