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Why Question Me?
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Why Question Me, You Know The Answer! You ask me if I love you I tell you the answer's yes But why me you ask I'll answer as I can Why do I love you You speak to my soul When I lay alone I hear you Calling me back to your arms Being held by you I shake with need When I kiss your lips Stars shoot across heaven You touch my heart With tender words When I breathe a sigh You lift my spirit Nothing can harm me When wrapped in your care No dark shadows Will menace my night You give me hope You bring me peace All I am, and ever will be Is because I am loved Because I am Loved by you Why would I not love you? Marsha |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
quote: You have some wonderful lines in this poem. Good work. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thanks Elizabeth, I love your work and I appreciate you reading mine. Marsha |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is lovely Marsha! With answers like these, there need not be a question. You've spoken your heart so clearly within these beautiful words. Wonderful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So ask him if he loves you too and let him reply to you as fully as you did to him. This was wonderful through and through and I just love the way your works shine but I must admit that this particular one may just be my favorite so far of yours. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~marsha this is the first piece by you i've had the pleasure to read and respond to. i really like this poem a lot. you write with a lot of energy and a grace i admire. take care. i look forward to reading more from you. Amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
You definately answered the question, and a most beautiful job you did with it too! A thorough answer but uncomplicated. Nice Work. Abra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kit, thank you, your work is always beautiful. So I thank you for spreading your spirit around.   Mark, do I dare ask, I will, and if he does then I'll glow. If he doesn't then c'est la vie, and I shall be richer for just knowing him! I thank you for your words which always are amazingly beautiful. So you think this is the best, why thank you kind sir. I think it's being in the company of masters that does it. Oh and love of course. Aimster, I thank you for your far to kind words, thank you for reading, I appreciate it and cherish each reply.  Waverly917 I thank you for you reading this little poem of mine, and thank you for your praise. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ This is WONDERFUL ! 'All I am, and ever will be Is because I am loved Big smiles of agreement here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is just lovely Marsha ... lucky guy ... have you shown this to him? Of course if you write like this he must already know ... it would be written in your eyes and in your smile |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bubbles! now how did i miss this one?? this is wonderful writing! very sweet and romantic.. i love it! (and i'd like to say more but i'm falling asleep..!!) saving this in my library so i can come back to it!! hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This a wonderful present for somebody, Marsha...can feel the chemistry all the way through the screen! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge I'm so glad you like it, I thank you for stopping by to read this. Thank you for your kind words, I always find your work special, so praise from you is more than I really deserve. Rex thank you for reading this, I always read your work because it's so amazing. I hope he knows how I feel, and I'm sure it shows. Dee thank you kid, you like it huh! Admittedly not a patch on your work but it 'tis my own, as the saying goes. Thanks for reading it, you know I appreciate it. Take care Bubbles Serenity Thank you for reading my poem and a million thanks for your very kind words. Your works is always so good and I really do love it. Thanks Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 09-29-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Came back for a second read. I really do like this one Marsha. You have penned a beauty for sure. Now where is the sequel to where you asked him? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark thank you for coming back, and as soon as I ask him, Passions will be the first to know. I get such a boost from just being here, and especially from your work. I know I tell you so but you might just think I'm being nice. I'm not it's the best, truly. Thanks again Mark Marsha |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha... Ah....you have done it again!!! How I love to read the thoughts in your heart! The only answer I can ever think of to the question, "Why me?", is "Because..."! Great writing here, my friend!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny thank you from the bottom of my heart, such kind praise from you. I know I don't deserve to have so many friends who read my work. Still I thank you each and everyone of you. Sunny you in particular have always inspired me, your work is as unique as your soul. Which has obviously been kissed by an angel. Oh and thank you for the cupid, although I don't think I'll have to bother him at the moment. Take care Marsha |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, why not...James |
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