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She Said Hello
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She Said Hello |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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She Said Hello It was an incredible first word a beginning and a promise blended into a breath becoming a given pledge the creation of paradise on earth a coming home a warmth an opening invitation to forever the creation of paradise on earth and like the sound of angels wings like spirits of old welcoming new a pronouncement of the heart pressed soft to the ear of the receiver the creation of paradise on earth all she bestowed was the whisper of eternal sun a sanctuary for the soul endless journeys into night promises never to be forgotten it was an incredible first word Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this is wonderful......'a begining and a promise' enjoyed  -SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
karilea-- beautiful poem..."hello" is such a wonderful word that makes everyone smile. you have penned a truly wonderful poem m'friend. take care. ~Amy~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is utterly delightful. Hello such a simple word and a promise. This is a beauty you've penned here. I love this, an inspiration, and you've done it again, I love this one too. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...so pleased to see you happy... Amy, handing out smiles is easy... Marsha, too true, I'm in my simple form today...thank you all! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Huh, Sunshine says "I'm in my simple form today"...I think it's more like 'splendid form'...*g* HUSG |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hello Sunshine! I think that says it all. . . ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMM and dont we just anticipate that first hello from that perfect stanger looking to be a friend or more...hello...yes hello...its the beginning Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
RG, you are too cute... Sven, sounds like a song...no, wait, that's good morning starshine......now, get THAT tune out of your head... yes we do, Paula...as it should be!... thank you all... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A little word attached to so many things...this was wonderful reading Sunshine~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you BDC....so glad you enjoyed.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I only realize how incredible just now after reading you |
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