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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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come bathe with me in hot springs of the earth splurging sinfully as if in a bordello amongst magnolia trees and holly relaxing to the strings of a cello come bath with me in our symphony where natural minerals heal and invite within rocky mountains majesty and skies of lavender bright healing in hot pools of the earth where grazing mountain sheep roam the wonderous feeling of rebirth beneath darkness and heavens starry dome rejuvenate our love in hot springs the vitality of mind..body and spirit sings A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely descriptive writing...sounds like a plan...could be a rendezvous...James |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Such a beautiful piece, Victoria. How could any man refuse! Dee |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
mmm..very nice.  Sounds like a fun visit to me. Your descriptions make me want to sink right in. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James..i didnt think anyone liked this one..thanks for sending it around again.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sounds perfect after a long day! Very enjoyable read~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well..i wouldnt mind having an invitation myself haa...thank you Dee.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Temptress..since i have a pinched nerve today..i could use it haa.. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you butterflies dont cry..so glad you peeked in... A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful comparisons Victoria ... what better place to rejuvinate one's love than in a "rejuvinating spa" ... very creative! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you kit..so glad you enjoyed.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
splurging sinfully as if in a bordello amongst magnolia trees and holly Victoria, There is a soulful, earthy energy to the passions in this piece, I enjoyed greatly. The above mentioned lines stood out in my mind, as both magnolia and holly weave a bit of magic for me. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Robert..your comments inspire me to keep writing..looking forward to reading more of your poetry.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very lovely and I love the mention of Magnolia trees. My favorite tree for sure. I loved this from beginning to end. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How enchanting...such a picture you paint |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Mark..i wrote another about making love under a magnolia tree..i was in Vegas and a pic of a magnolia tree was on the wall and it inspired me to write a poem after i lost all my money haa..nothing else to do in vegas when you are broke haa.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Paula..im going have to set out and look for a hot springs now..im sure theres one around here somewhere haa.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May all your hot spring adventures be fulfilling...James |
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