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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Loves Storm The storms are raging, wildly, madly out there in the night Rain is lashing down, driven ahead, hurled by howling winds Here, wrapped in lovers warmth, glowing, feeling so right Lightening flashes to lime our bodies in light, close interlocked In lovers ancient and eternal dance in burning passions light The storm, we ride this night, as we do, will do over again Is the storm of passions flaring flames, loves ever true power To find such endless joy, to soar higher, faster once again We become one with the power that teases, tempts taunts us Lifted on to a different plane, where there's only us, no gain Heat erups from you to me, and flames of passion seer and burn Hotter and higher, faster and further, our spirits, souls flow Like rivers of molten love flowing, pour to take their own turn Loves benediction, at the alter of delight we take our vows As passions own simple student I humbly wish, ask to learn Loves own truth we share, passions lessons I at last comprehend Each time expecting that the raindow's end has been reached Discovering delightfully, amazingly that there will be no end As these flames sink back to a delicious, gently glowing simmer Ah! This, loves heat and light, we give to our souls to amend Marsha (SEA, nothing mushy about this one either  )Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I believe in the 4th line it should be line our bodies, Although, I might be able to use that Lime our bodies phrase in something a touch darker in nature. A well crafted poem, a bit long of line, But done well. The long lines give it an older feel. Enjoyed the Read Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Prof. Gloom, actually, it's lime as in lime light, but thank you and I'm glad you liked it. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The wonderful intimacies of love making captured very well here Marsha....love the highs you were travelling on and the reflections of the closeness never ending.... very nice work!! take care ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, thank you I'm happy that you liked this. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
quite a love storm...love the imagery ... enjoyed reading it... well done ((hugs)) Charisma |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
As love has it's storms of passion, this is inspired. Very nice read. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
What a way to ride out a storm!!!! I love the way you're writing, so much heat  Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bubbly..great write! nothin like a great passion storm!  hugs, dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Charisma, I love a Love Storm, it cleanses the soul. This was actually inspired by SEA's Storm Within and Mark's The Storm. So many thanks to them both.  Whispers Caress, I agree, a storm with all those dramatic lightening flashes and rolling thunder. Delicious glad you liked it Pepper, Mmmm it is isn't it, a perfect way to ride out a storm  As for the heat, perhaps this should be called my fire storm. Dee Oh love, so you like? Well it was you who said I was Ms Inspired lately. Actually I agree with you, but maybe, it's because I'm scribbling so much that some of it has got to be okay. Anyway thanks love Take care Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marsha, Storms of love are very mind-refreshing. Great write, well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I read this last night and could have sworn I replied to it. I guess I got lost in the storm, but oh what a storm to get lost in. Truely one of your best my friend and president. Now, who would complain of a storm such as this? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Daniel, very refreshing, for the body and the soul. I'm glad you like this, I think it's all the storms we've been having here. No I know whom is causing them and I don't complain a bit. Mark my friend, truly I thank you, actually I agree with you, if I'm going to be lost and lashed by a storm what better storm could I ask for. It's all the dramatic lightening and thunderbolts, it just seems to bring other things to mind. Mmmm there now my minds flown off again, gone off to seek shelter or to stir up another storm. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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