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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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We lie in candles' shimmer neck to cheek whispering intensity restrained a sigh, so oft fading away to nothingness waiting anticipating the lightest touch everything unspoken in deep body language touch to thigh lip lying livid grappling and vivid …but so not enough < !signature--> Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a sigh, so oft fading away to nothingness waiting anticipating the lightest touch everything unspoken in deep body language touch to thigh lip lying livid grappling and vivid …but so not enough ================ way cool poem Keth... excellent...love the aching in this... and the sensuality of it.. the depth of the need... is it ever enough ... are we ever satiated? (die trying me thinks)  very cool write indeed... later-vivid-lip-gator jm |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a very sensual mood shaped poem with a great yearning appeal to the special times that just don't happen often enough......very very good work!! ethome |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, for that satisfied feeling... this is very sensual, Kethry, very nice. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nice piece my friend, and loved the title...emailed you. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kethry~ I loved this...very nice to say the least!  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, this is wonderful, full of sensual feelings, so utterly truthful. I really like this one it's superb. Such good work.  Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone for the read and comments Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is wonderful; though what else could one expect from you!!! Very sensual and very much feeling!!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Pepper, not too much spice is it? Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Keth this is sooo deeply sensual and wonderfully written, I loved it  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie, thanks for that. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Glad I stopped in for a second read on this...I could have sworn I left a reply  Oh well here it is now Great sensual write Kethry...and is it ever "enough"...lol |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BDC, Thanks, and no I don't believe it is ever enough. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The best times are those that leave you satisfied....but aching for more...no...never enough |
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