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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-11-02 07:16 AM


We lie
in candles' shimmer
neck to cheek
whispering
intensity restrained
a sigh, so oft
fading away
to nothingness
waiting
anticipating
the lightest touch
everything unspoken
in deep body language
touch to thigh
lip lying livid
grappling and vivid

…but so not enough

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Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-11-02 08:38 AM


a sigh, so oft
fading away
to nothingness
waiting
anticipating
the lightest touch
everything unspoken
in deep body language
touch to thigh
lip lying livid
grappling and vivid
…but so not enough
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way cool poem Keth...
excellent...love the aching in this...
and the sensuality of it..
the depth of the need...
is it ever enough ... are we ever satiated?
(die trying me thinks)  

very cool write indeed...
later-vivid-lip-gator
jm

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-11-02 08:42 AM


This is a very sensual mood shaped poem with a great yearning appeal to the special times that just don't happen often enough......very very good work!!     ethome
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-11-02 10:19 AM


yes, for that satisfied feeling...
this is very sensual, Kethry, very nice.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



jwesley
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2000-11-02 10:47 AM


Nice piece my friend, and loved the title...emailed you.

jwesley

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SEA
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5 posted 2000-11-02 10:51 AM


Kethry~ I loved this...very nice to say the least!   -SEA
Marsha
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6 posted 2000-11-02 12:47 PM


Kethry, this is wonderful, full of sensual feelings, so utterly truthful. I really like this one it's superb. Such good work.  
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Kethry
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7 posted 2000-11-02 03:33 PM


Thanks everyone for the read and comments

Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
8 posted 2000-11-02 07:09 PM


This is wonderful; though what else could one expect from you!!!  Very sensual and very much feeling!!!!

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
9 posted 2000-11-03 04:14 AM


Thanks Pepper,
not too much spice is it?
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
10 posted 2000-11-03 06:14 AM


Oh Keth this is sooo deeply sensual and wonderfully written, I loved it
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
11 posted 2000-11-03 06:30 AM


Tracie,
thanks for that.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
12 posted 2000-11-03 07:29 AM


Glad I stopped in for a second read on
this...I could have sworn I left a reply  
Oh well here it is now   Great sensual
write Kethry...and is it ever "enough"...lol


Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
13 posted 2000-11-03 04:27 PM


BDC,
Thanks, and no I don't believe it is ever enough.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Paula Finn
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Posts 5546
missouri
14 posted 2000-11-08 12:01 PM


The best times are those that leave you satisfied....but aching for more...no...never enough
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