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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2000-11-01 06:13 PM



     The world is a stage
     and we are all actors the game is life,
     we play a part
     doctor, lawyer, husband wife.

     Take the stage
     put on a show,
     hide behind smiles
     what we don't want the world to know.

     Curtains drop
     lights go dim,
     step off the stage
     just to do it again.

     Leave the stage
     hope we don't fall,
     wake up to morning
     the next curtain call.



On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.


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1 posted 2000-11-01 06:23 PM


A sad view of life, I'm afraid....we should relish the excitement of being on stage more. Many people never got the chance to perform

this is well written....

Victoria
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2 posted 2000-11-01 06:26 PM


the next curtain call..

i like that D.. CyberHUGS ..haa...

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


peppermint35
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3 posted 2000-11-01 06:38 PM


Excellent poem; the images evoked are a bit sad though; the world and society requires us to play roles.

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

Ron K. Fox
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4 posted 2000-11-01 07:34 PM


It's sad that people think of life as a routine. but each day is a gift. Never the same...always...always something different...life is. think of the other alternative. I'd rather have a boring day, thank you.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Denise
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5 posted 2000-11-01 09:26 PM


I've certainly felt like this at times. Great poem, Gentle Spirit!

Denise

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6 posted 2000-11-01 09:54 PM


all the world's a stage, and the men and women, merely players

Wonderful poem GS, I've found that it's not so lonely on the stage as long as you've got someone in the audience. . .

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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