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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 The angels saw you reach for me did you hear them sigh? The stars saw you hold me as the night passed slowly by. ~*~ The moon saw you heal me did you feel it paint a tear? The raindrops heard you soothe me as you chased away my fear. ~*~ The wind felt you send a kiss to me did you feel it laugh as you blew? The sunrise felt you touch me as it blushed with a rosy hue. ~*~ The trees heard you tease me did you see them dance and sway? The blossoms tasted as you mended me upon the dew drops their petals lay. ~*~ The butterflies saw you release me did you see them cry? The heavens felt you love me as they darkened with Good-bye. ~*~ I can finally come home without hiding within the walls, Thank you for understanding and being here to open the door when I knocked. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
great feelings and poem here Miss. Dont Cry here's a bundle o sunshine for you (psst i got no sunshine graphics so just close ye eyes or yuh go outside but its prolly cold so yuh yuh yuh yuh  ) |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is a wonderfull poem. Keith Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely, a glimpse of your soul here.... Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful poem, right from your heart. Charisma |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such a lovely piece of your heart BDC... This is just beautiful. Bonnie |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Butterflies--this is beautifully written from your heart! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Butterflies~ this is so amazing.....jeez...I'm out of words to describe....it's stunning. -SEA |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
The moon saw you heal me did you feel it paint a tear? I love those lines, the entire piece is heartwarming. Robert Joseph |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleButterfliesDC~ This is truly a piece of beauty ! Gently flitting in on the wings of a butterfly ... landing right in my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The moon saw you heal me did you feel it paint a tear? The raindrops heard you soothe me as you chased away my fear. ~*~ The wind felt you send a kiss to me did you feel it laugh as you blew? The sunrise felt you touch me as it blushed with a rosy hue. ================= ahh..you know this is one of my favs of yours and you know the reasons ... our guardian angels touch us and help us heal ... give us the strength to do what we have to do to see our own light ... welcome home me sweet SS...  love you me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The angels saw you reach for me did you hear them sigh? The stars saw you hold me as the night passed slowly by. ~*~ The moon saw you heal me did you feel it paint a tear? The raindrops heard you soothe me as you chased away my fear. ~*~ The wind felt you send a kiss to me did you feel it laugh as you blew? The sunrise felt you touch me as it blushed with a rosy hue. ~*~ The trees heard you tease me did you see them dance and sway? The blossoms tasted as you mended me upon the dew drops their petals lay. ~*~ The butterflies saw you release me did you see them cry? The heavens felt you love me as they darkened with Good-bye. My sweet friend and butterfly, first off you know it makes my heart smile to see you with us again and the above is why my heart will forever sing. There never will be a "good-bye" in what has been shared, only the tomorrows of promise that for now have just been placed in safety's rest. My step will be lighter today as I dance around in all I must do. Hugs to you my sweet butterfly and so much much more. You know this do you not? Yes, I know you do. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-11-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
This one had me dancing:  I loved it - and I'm so happy you're back ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome home, Holly...and what a perfectly beautiful poem! Sweetly written and full of wonder...Love to you, m'friend...so glad you're back! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly, Beautiful!! This was full of such love and open honest emotion. To say it touched me would be an understatement. "The butterflies saw you release me did you see them cry? The heavens felt you love me as they darkened with Good-bye." This is my favorite line...but the whole piece is just stunning! Excellent! Love, Amy P.S. Glad to see you're back...and my offer still lies on the table. Take care sweetie. "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
butterflies don't cry this is a magnificent poem, always remember where there is one door shut there is another one open, poetry so often let's us fly where we would never dream , I can see youve taken ahold and begin to spread your wings and see a rainbow of promise I wish you happiness on your journey, there is magic in your poem, thank you for sharing with us. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
WOW* Thanks to ya! And yeppers it's tooooo cold but thanks for the thought Keith* Thank you so much~ Kathleen* A pleasure to have you read, thank you~ Charisma* Many thanks to you I appreciate it~ Bonnie* Thank you very much~ Martie* Tis the only place to write from Thank you~Sea* Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kindness~ Robert* Thank you so much, so nice of you to read and reply~ Marge* You've given me a sunbeam...thank you sweetie~ JM* Thank you sweets it's good to come back...you know how hard it is to stay away Mark* I do know, thank you from the bottom of my heart~ Sir Poet Bill* Thank you loved your fancy foot work~S'en* Big hugs girlie...I could never stay away, thank you for everything Love ya! Amy* Thank-you so much for your sweet comments and for your friendship....both are what makes you so very special to me~ RB* Your comment touched my heart...thank you so much for sharing it with me. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"The sunrise felt you touch me as it blushed with a rosy hue." It's wonderful to see you posting again Butterflies ... and such an enchanting read, beautifully descriptive, well done! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
What a wonderful surprise to pop back in after a short sabbatical (did I spell that right?) and see you back. Some people write poems that seem to go right from the heart of the writer to the heart of the reader. To put the feeling that you have into an area of the readers heart where they can feel it almost as the writer does.  to So to speak |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kit* Thank you so much, it's a pleasure to post again~ TLS* It is an honor to receive such a compliment, thank you from the bottom of my heart sincerely~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, So nice to see you again my friend. This was stunning . . . such beautiful writing from a beautiful heart. I am happy that you are able to return to us . . . somehow I knew you would one day. You have great talent and it is a pleasure to read your work always. Take care my dear friend. ***HUGS*** Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
 Butterflies_don't_cry- this is so beautiful...i love it. so glad you flew back in. -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-11-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
"The wind felt you send a kiss to me did you feel it laugh as you blew The sunrise felt you touch me as it blushed with a rosy hue" Loved this verse a lot as well as the rest. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
What a very straight from the heart Poem this was. Thank-you for sharing yiur emotion with us. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LW* Thank you from the bottom of my heart sweetie, it's a joy to be back among friends such as yourself~ Vicky* Awe...thank you for the b-fly hello what a pretty sight! Insect* Thank you so much for reading and for sharing your comment with me~ KitKat* The pleasure is all mine to be able to share it with you. Thank you so much~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Holly...you always find that part of my heart I try so hard to hide...how do you do that? thank you for just being that beautiful butterfly |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Paula* Thank you, it means so much to see your reply here...and that part of your heart needs to see the sun..let it shine~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Because I can and since they gave me the power to do this I am. Besides, I really love this one my friend. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'The butterflies saw you release me did you see them cry? The heavens felt you love me as they darkened with Good-bye.' Hey, Butterflies! You've actually brought tears to my eyes, but I'm a little emotional today, anyhow!  But it was still absolutely beautiful! Welcome back! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
If I picked the part I truly loved, I'd have to rewrite the whole thing...so surfice to say it touched my heart in a special way. jwesley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* It was a shock to see this one back up here...thank you for your kindness once again~ SP* It's a pleasure to be back here...as much as I had hated to leave I needed to so I could remember why I loved it here~ JW* You've honestly touched my heart with your kind words...it's an honor to receive such praise. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
A beautiful poem from a pure heart. Just lovely and so touching. Marcy |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Butterfly, this has to be one of my most fav's of your's. I can't find the words to tell you just how much I adore this one other than what simple response I give you now... Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Butterflies_dont_cry This is absolutly wonderful. One of the best I've read in a while. Well done dear Glad to have stumbled upon it. Rich |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I sensed a great deal from this poem besides just its beauty Holly. I felt relief, love and a final peace within as well. I am so glad to see you posting again and even more so to feel the demons from within finally resting and in time descending... Hugs to you, my friend and never let go of your new found strength. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marcy* Thank you so much for your comments..they are always appreciated~ Coco* You are just the sweetest! Thank you so much~ Rich* What a compliment...it's an honor thank you from the bottom of my heart~ Marina* You are definately perceptive I'm doing great...thank you so much..glad to see you stop in from time to time Take care of YOU!! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
if anyone didn't before-- they do now--wonderful words from thy tearless pen Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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