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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Memory of passion rich, red, all encompassing. Voice of past love calls across the mist of time. I am in a slow slide into the abyss of deprivation. Gone.. Yet still an iron grip squeezes the last drop of sweeteness from my heart. No lack of feeling here. Remembered perfection blended into crushed hope, tainted love. His schizophrenic affection creates an impossible scenario. Idealization of a dream unrealized. No more. Inconceivably gone. He has effectively paved over memory lane... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Once again I'm left with the mirrored feeling of ache in reading your words as they drip of pain and good-bye...but there is something that I've also sensed in your work as of late...there is the under current of hope and strength...it's coming...and will continue if you keep opening up like this and letting it pour out...Excellent writing~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
They say there's a rainbow in the darkest times and I believe if you'll look you will find that rainbow.Hope things get better for you. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
catalinamoon this peom yearn for consilation and i well done. You have expressed yourself so well. Rich |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you have expressed your feelings so well.....its a hard time, but I see also a glimp of light coming through the darkenis... excellent penned (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
So sad cat expressed yourself deeply winged ~HUG~ floating your way Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Catalina, this is such an aching piece, but I feel your hope, I really do. So perfectly expressed, this is a wonderful write. If you ever need a hand reach out love and I'll be there. I remember how lonely the heart gets in these times, so if you ever need a someone to rage against loves cruel twists, just call. Take care Mushy Marsha There is always hope  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Catalinamoon, I know this type, run as fast as you can and don't look back. Peace to you. Corinne |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
yeah, I agree with Butterflies. There is that sense of hope in your writing lately. And, you have been doing an excellent job!! Great writing! sp  Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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