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Precious and Silky Nights
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Precious and Silky Nights |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Precious and Silky Nights Sometimes I don't know what to think or what to say or what to do. I only know I feel all alone when I'm not with you. Wish you were in my arms then I wouldn't feel all alone. I would feel happiness and satisfaction. Your breasts against my chest. Your lips locked on mine. Two bodies interwoven together nice and tight loving each other with all of their might kissing and hugging and romancing and loving just so so right. Oh how I miss those precious and silky nights. Jameslee@November01,2000 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ this is so soft......so sad......and very romantic........I hope you find her in your arms soon.  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not only was this precious, but the format had a "Rorschach" quality to its presentation. Well done, James... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Ah, James....the longing rings through loud and clear!!! Very well done Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
James, Well written, echoes of love. Hope she is not too far away. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
((warm hugs))..loneless...its such a sad thing when your desire for your love. translate it very well in your words. Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know this feeling all too well my friend. . . Wonderful from you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well written my friend..."precious and silky nights"...great thought(s) here. jwesley |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well James, you stated an obvious fact in a very silky way Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
James...this is simply devine |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So delicately woven with the threads of love and longing...excellent writing James~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, Sunshine, peppermint, Daniel, Charisma, Sven, Wesley, jamie, hoot owl and butterflies for reading and commenting...I send much appreciation your way...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is delicately woven into a fine piece of artistry, very nice James! Nathan |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Heres to those silky nights James..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 I love those "Precious and Silky Nights..."...too bad they're not every night, but then they wouldn't be so special. You've inspired some good ideas here, thanks. Bob <>< |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Nate, Victoria, and Bob for the nice comments...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi James...sigh sweetie...you make me dream |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Paula...dreams can be fun...James |
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