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A Touch Of Heaven
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A Touch Of Heaven |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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A Touch Of Heaven A ngel T his is O our time, belonging U tterly to us, so C ome soothe my aching soul H old me in your tender heart O ur bodies resting from passions race together F eeling our skins damp with lovers dew H olding, and being at one togther E cstacy builds again the fire A lways burning, ever new V essle of delight E mbrace me N ow Marsha |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Marsha...I like this TOUCH of heaven...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A very creative piece. Nice writing Marsha  |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Marsha Nicely done - very sensual. Ariana |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nice acrostic. A touch of heaven....nice way of describing when two people feel the same for each other. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, thank you this was inspired by Mark's the other day. I thought I'd give it a try, and I enjoyed it very much. Although I think I've got some way to go.  Butterflies dc thank you, it sort of wrote itself. I thank you for stopping to read it. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ariana, what a pretty name that is, thank you for stopping by and reading this. Mmmmmm yes I suppose it is sensual.  Marsha |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, thank you, you say the nicest things. I know it's not in your league but then it wouldn't be, and thanks for the inspiration with your beautiful acrostic. Yes a touch of heaven exactly describes the feeling between two who share. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully penned, lovely poem "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Brian, thank you for taking the time to reply, and I'm happy that you liked it. I do too, but that's because it describes something rather special. Marsha |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I enjoy acrostics...not easy, but fun...a true challenge...I must dig some of mine out... enjoyed the read, oh little MM... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha-- this is a very beautiful acrostic! you have an amazing talent that your loves shines through. simply wonderful. i am enjoy these love poems that you post very much. they make me S M I L E! kudos to you Mushy Marsha Take care. Amy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, have you been digging about in the vaults love? I actually enjoyed doing this, although I wouldn't like to do too many. You know my brain isn't up to the constant challenge. Amy, thank you sweet, this is indeed a love poem, and I'm pleased it made you smile. Amazing what love can inspire you to do, although you know that, for your own work is truly inspired of late. Take care Mushy Marsha  < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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