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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 2000-11-01 01:59 PM


There's artificial sweeteners
And artificial eggs
There's artificial hamburger
And artificial legs

There's artificial breastises
And artificial works of art
Artificial hair for the bald
Even canned artificial fart

There's artificial wood
And artificial tiles
There's artificial love
And artificial smiles

Bondo for the auto shell
Synthetic oil inside
A booty pad for the butt
And seats of naugahyde

Artificial rain from seeded cloud
Plastic fork and spoon and knife
Fake coffee in a styrafoam cup
Is there anything REAL left in life?


Alicat

© Copyright 2000 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-11-01 02:04 PM


this is great another one from the mind of the ali o and i got an artificial artificial heart yuh yuh
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2000-11-01 02:06 PM


There is plenty still real in life.   We just have to avoid all the fake stuff to get to it! Nice poem here, Mr. Kitty Kat! I like it, and it certainly is wunnerful to see you here! Funny, I used to have a boyfriend who used the word "brestises".   BUT..lets not get into that!   Love ya Kitty Kat Friend!
*Jenn*

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

3 posted 2000-11-01 03:05 PM


Well heres a genuine reply...Cool! you have this world pegged! keep those cat calls coming, and just duck at the shoes thrown. Later.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-11-01 03:12 PM


I'm looking for it, Ali.  RELENTLESSLY.

loved this one.

Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-11-01 03:34 PM


im thinking...im thinking..haa..a good one alicat..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2000-11-01 03:49 PM


Hey my friend...when we get to the saccharine poetry, let me know, 'cause that will be when I will need to stop...

this was good...very good!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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