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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-11-01 02:56 PM


Sun’s Lines

Take thou the slender line
of written word, all feather soft
and cool of night air,
brush your love-line
against my cheek,
aged by time
but young at heart

and do not allow the passage
of time to detain you
from passing thought of
ageless love in any form
from you
on to a greater being

for the Son encompasses the
sun and moon and stars
and remains all that
is holy
and
right.

Take thou thy slender line
of written word
to embrace the
Son.




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-11-01 03:02 PM


You speak beautiful words of The Word...enlighteneing this forum. Thank you sunshine.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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2 posted 2000-11-01 03:09 PM


I, too, thank you........this is a really beautiful reminder of faith, and hope.  


Follow your dream!


Marsha
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3 posted 2000-11-01 03:31 PM


Kari, breathtaking, really beautiful. This is so peaceful and just.........
I love this one, love it really
Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-11-01 03:32 PM


Ron, even tho this is a repost, I am especially glad you visited it, thank you...

Bonnie, glad you didn't mind Pete's repeat...

Marsha, you Majestic woman you...so glad you liked it! Thank you...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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