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Open Poetry #10

I Wait

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2000-10-31 09:07 PM

     I wait
     for the night to come
     so that I may feel your touch.

     I wait
     to feel you gentle kisses
     and hear your soft sighs.

     I wait
     to feel the man that you are
     within the woman that is me.

     I wait
     for the tide to rise and fall
     within us both.

     I wait
     to lie in the arms
     of love.

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

1 posted 2000-10-31 09:24 PM

GS* Waiting for this is like waiting for
Christmas as a child...very beautiful...soft
and delicate as the finest silk~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-10-31 09:31 PM

GS, this is beautiful. . . there is no other word. . .

Wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2000-11-01 06:11 PM

BDC, Sven, thank you both so much for your kind words, and for taking the time to read my thoughts. ~soft smiles~

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

4 posted 2000-11-02 09:02 AM

Gentle Spirit,
I am mining the forums today for poems that had reletively few replys. Yours was the first golden nugget I found. So eloquent and simple an expression of such a basic need. Something we all await. Sadly some for a lifetime.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2000-11-02 07:39 PM

LS, I agree, I think we all wait at sometime or the other in our lives. Thanks for breezing in.

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