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I Wait |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I wait for the night to come so that I may feel your touch. I wait to feel you gentle kisses and hear your soft sighs. I wait to feel the man that you are within the woman that is me. I wait for the tide to rise and fall within us both. I wait to lie in the arms of love. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
GS* Waiting for this is like waiting for Christmas as a child...very beautiful...soft and delicate as the finest silk~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GS, this is beautiful. . . there is no other word. . . Wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
BDC, Sven, thank you both so much for your kind words, and for taking the time to read my thoughts. ~soft smiles~ |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Gentle Spirit, I am mining the forums today for poems that had reletively few replys. Yours was the first golden nugget I found. So eloquent and simple an expression of such a basic need. Something we all await. Sadly some for a lifetime. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
LS, I agree, I think we all wait at sometime or the other in our lives. Thanks for breezing in.  |
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