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fragrance of rose (Marge's challenge)
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fragrance of rose (Marge's challenge) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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fragrance of rose fills the air one hundred candles glowing i pray before this night is through true love i will be knowing my heart is doing somersaults impatient from the waiting sweet promise of a night with you my soul's anticipating harvest moon lights eastern sky while twinkling stars now hover all is perfect...scene is set now enter passionate lover a cast of one, i take the stage as glaring spotlight beams and once again, my leading man is only in my dreams ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great,Vicky! Very nice! Denise |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
wait for the dream to come true. Then you'll have a happily forever after ending. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Girlfriend ! You did just GREAT ! I love it ! You delivered the punch ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hmmmm somehow I see you in a spotlight alright..but not one of waiting. Beautiful verse my friend. Truely I mean that. Btw........ywhmsjwas!!!!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
well..youve already heard this....but... WOW!! THIS IS AWESOME!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!! great thought process on this one..very wonderful job tricks! hugs, dg "after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well I dont know exactly what the challenge from Margie was ... but it inspired a beautiful poem in you. sometimes the fantasy we create in our mind is much better than the real thing... lovely writing Vicky...perfect imagery.. I could see it all in my mind.. seems I've had the same fantasy myself... but then I guess many of us "girls" do. take care jm |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Very nice! I didn't see that challenge, and I love roses, I need to go read! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Vicky, great writing, I loved the punch at the end. I think I need to check out that challenge and see if I can even come close to your lovely write. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
*applause* Well written with a well-delivered punch, Vicky! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Well done....wonderful piece and so romantic....love it... Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Rose petals and candles...a very beautiful start to my favorite dream as well....Lovely work Vicky, whatever the challenge from Marge was I'm sure you met it with this one...Exquisite imagery!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi everybody...first of all, i guess i should explain the challenge. this was not a posted challenge. i had mentioned to marge that i am a sucker for a good challenge, so she more or less called my bluff...lol. she supplied me with the rhyming words... knowing glowing waiting anticipating lover hover beams dreams and she told me to run with them...no particular form or style...just whatever came out of my pen, and this was the result. feel free to accept the challenge as well. i'm sure marge won't mind, and i would love to see what you come up with.  Denise- thank you so much. really glad you like. Ron- thanks for the encouraging words. glad you enjoyed. Marge- my challenging friend...lol. this was so much fun!! thank you! really glad you like the results. ((((((((hugs)))))))) Mark- oh you sweet cowboy...thank you so much. glad you like this. hmmmmm...now lets see...about that coded message...lol. dg- so...let me get this straight...does that mean you like this one?? lol thank you my friend. really glad you like. Janet Marie- so right you are...often the fantasy is much better than the real thing... but i'm hoping and believing that's not ALWAYS the case. thanks so much, my friend. glad you enjoyed. Irish Rose- so glad you enjoyed this. feel free to join in on the challenge. have fun. Kethry- glad you enjoyed this. the instructions for the challenge are at the beginning of this post. have fun with it. Elizabeth- thanks so much. i'm so glad you enjoyed this. Charisma- really glad you like this. thanks for the kind reply. Holly- wow...thank you so much for the kind reply. this was a fun challenge for me, and i'm really glad you enjoyed the results. thanks again everybody!! -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Me again ... just reading the lovely responses. You did a superb job with those little rhymies. And I would be tickled to see anyone else come up with something on it. Have a go at it, friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Vicki Wonderful poem, lovely to read and you met Marge's challenge very well indeed. I hope everyone else has a go at it  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- well, hello friend! so glad you came back for another read. i'd love to see what others come up with too. this was so much fun. Tracie- this was definitely a fun challenge to do. so glad you enjoyed it. thank you, my friend. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Thanks to Marge for inspiring this lovely bit of writing! This is wonderful, Vicky. You really rose to the challenge. Hope all your dreams come true.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marilyn- thank you so much, my friend. i enjoyed writing this one. so glad you enjoyed it. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Remembering~ One of my favorites to come from you~ *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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