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Autumn Changes Beware the Pen
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Autumn Changes Beware the Pen |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Rejoice in Autumn splendor. Like the trees it ignites, Glow with your own, Spirit of many colors. This was the season, Of the harvest moon, Early dark, and a sky full of stars. The memories echo from within, Calling for attention, From a ravenous poetic appetite. Bid them no attention, For there are new things in the air! The wind suggests change, And a new kind of needy wandering. How could possibilities not become endless, With cool nights, To aid lonely passions? As the night wind attentively plays, And dances upon your cheek, Be oblivious to all crossings. Just you and your seasons, And another change of pace. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Siofra, Welcome to passions. I enjoyed your splendid poem. I hope to read more. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Thank you kindly for your welcome, your reading, and your reply. I am many. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Soifra, this is a wonderful poem! You paint the many facets of Autumn with vivid colors. Welcome to Passions  < !signature-->...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture [This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Siofra...what a beautiful entry into our home... very gentle, melodic writing. Please check your email!  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The powers of the Autumn reached out and touched from the Stars with this one. Lovely read. Welcome to PASSIONS and hope you stay around for a long time to come. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome my friend. . . Here in Michigan, the leaves have already begun their final show. . . in colors that we could never imagine. . . Excellent poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful imagery! Welcome to the best poetry family on the internet! |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Beautiful vivid poem! Welcome to Passions!! Kelly  You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Whoaa! What a welcome. Thanks so far everyone. I am glad you like my work. I am many. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Boy!!! Autumn has awaken your pen. This was simply awesome. Welcome to Passions. Hopefully you'll grace this site through the change of seasons to come. I definitely like to see what Spring brings. Garfield |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Thank you for replying to my post in Dark Passions. This poem was absolutely lovely and has all the character I have come to expect from your prose. Well done fellow poet, and welcome to Passions ^_^ LadySofia [This message has been edited by LadySofia (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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