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Passions Voice
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since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

0 posted 2000-10-30 08:04 PM

moon glows in the sky
no longer for my speared heart
dark surrounds my life

passion is life. . . ~Diana

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-30 08:06 PM

PV~ such a sad Haiku......yet very beautiful.....

-SEA

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-10-30 08:12 PM

Don't worry about the moon, you'll find someone else when the sunshines. I do like your haiku.

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-30 08:24 PM

As the darkness creeps
A moonglow shines so brightly
Forgotten paths seen
just changing the perspective...moonlight can bring wonderful dreams.< !signature-->

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 10-30-2000).]

Rainydays
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since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

4 posted 2000-10-30 08:24 PM

I like it too, very much. Thank you ~

Rainydays

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-10-30 08:36 PM

PV,

Hang in there . . .out of darkness comes light. Nice haiku.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-10-30 08:47 PM

The sun will rise again my friend. . .

Well done. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

7 posted 2000-10-30 09:12 PM

When the moon has set
and the sun begins to shine
glowing will be you

lovely haiku PV--

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

SouthernStar
Junior Member

since 2000-10-30

Posts 23
Georgia

8 posted 2000-10-30 09:57 PM

You have expressed my own feelings as well. Maybe there really is a ray of light out there somewhere. Tessa

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2000-10-31 12:24 PM

PassionsVoice~

Then comes the dawning
Love spreads a cloak of splendor
Upon darkened heart

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

10 posted 2000-10-31 07:43 AM

What a sad haiku..but as the sun rises let it fill your heart

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King

Passions Voice
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since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

11 posted 2000-10-31 12:20 PM

Thank you all for your replies, it's still kind of dark, but I may be seeing some of the sun again very soon.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

12 posted 2000-10-31 12:42 PM

Diana, you tear my heart out with this one. Did you know that if you look hard enough and at the right time, then the darkened sky at night (moon or not) will carry a Midnight's rainbow for you? Trust me, I have seen it before. Take care of you my new friend of Passions.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

13 posted 2000-10-31 02:57 PM

midnight rainbow bright
come with moon this very night
carry heart now light

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

angelface
Junior Member

since 2000-10-25

Posts 40
Savannah area, Georgia

14 posted 2000-10-31 04:15 PM

So sad...but it reminds me that there is some other way than what I'm in right now :\

i ride the flames of this terrible intensity and clutch them to my fingers

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

15 posted 2000-10-31 06:32 PM

bump to the top you go.

Passions Voice
Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

16 posted 2000-11-01 12:25 PM

Mark, thank you for the bump, that was nice of you to do.  And thank you for your words, I know that I'll be able to see it in time, especially with the help of new friends like you.

Sunshine, thank you for that poem.  It really meant a lot to me.

Angelface, there is always another way.  I just can't see it yet.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

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