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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-10-30 02:40 PM


Slowly, slowly...
fingernails,
solace of a touch--
close your eyes
release
surprise
of power in seductive flux.

Golden hairs upon the thigh
a squint of eyes
of hunger's tide,
wash away footprint of pain,
Insanity becoming sane...

and all be damned--
awake--I shower
you
I ride the raging tower..
whimper, beg, and moan--
devoured,
a quiver, shivers,
floating flowers--

I puddle into you...


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-10-30 02:45 PM


Serenity~
Girl........
you are on fire here
LOVE IT!

-SEA

brian madden
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2 posted 2000-10-30 02:51 PM


Serenity I think my computer just melt beautiful poem sigh hot and tender...

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Elizabeth
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3 posted 2000-10-30 02:51 PM


Beautiful!

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-10-30 06:03 PM


SEA---thank you much, you sort of got the ball rolling today...(so to speak)  LOL &hugs

brian...glad it was good for you too! *wink*

Elizabeth, I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and for your gracious reply!

thank you much, good people!!!  

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 2000-10-30 06:14 PM


*gulp*
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6 posted 2000-10-30 06:19 PM


Golden hairs upon the thigh
a squint of eyes
of hunger's tide,
wash away footprint of pain,
Insanity becoming sane...

and all be damned--
awake--I shower
you
I ride the raging tower..
whimper, beg, and moan--
devoured,
a quiver, shivers,
floating flowers--

I puddle into you...

================
YOU PUDDLED????????
OH BABY!!!!!
me thinks me will pay money to see that  
mmm mmm mmm
SO---fess up..ya been in my raspberry tea...
I told ya that stuff is POTENT LOL
oh man do i love this poem
and this line........

>"Insanity becoming sane"<

EXACTLY what I been trying to say LOL
what a WAY COOL line that is...
poetic envy on that one me sweet ...
*sigh* ....I know ...
its hell being a moth.. and then its NOT LOL
YOU KNOW
*blowing kisses to the south*
rest up baby....you've had a big day LOL
me

spiked
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7 posted 2000-10-30 06:21 PM


Seren this is very erotic. Should i throw in the towel? Might need it
Rich

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8 posted 2000-10-30 06:25 PM


mmmmmmmmmmmmm

you know that I like this one serenity. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


serenity blaze
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9 posted 2000-10-31 12:41 PM


Chris, um, thanks, I think.  That was a pretty noncomittal gulp!!!

Rich?  again, whatever it takes!

Sven, said like a man who knows.

and m'twin, ppssst....I say we put Raspberry Tea in the water supplies...EVERYWHERE!!!!

Thanks guys had much fun with this one!!!

ma miller
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10 posted 2000-11-01 08:59 AM


serenity ... a seductive flower it is ... nice work
Paula Finn
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missouri
11 posted 2000-11-01 10:53 AM


Floating flowers on the puddle that is you...very erotic girl...
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12 posted 2000-11-01 12:29 PM


~S,...'I puddle into you...',...*sigh*. Gawd gurl,...you do amaze me. Glad to have caught this one. Always am. You know,...you outta get all your works into a book for me to carry around wherever I go....I'd like that. Take care of yourself. *Peace you.


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