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Where Shadows Sleep |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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 Awaiting morrows light Watching darkest surface Glowing chariot seen afar Apollo's misty chilling rays Where shadows sleep Wise man say "Those who live in the past let the future sneak up on them" and "Make each moment count, it could be your last" [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow!  Very cool  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Very few words can be as dramatic as you have made these. Nicely done. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hi Jeffrey, I find that I must be Ron's echo today (thanks, Ron!)...you have taken these few carefully chosen words and created a mood of dark anticipation and mystery. Wonderful writing, thank you! Rainydays |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you SEA , Ron & Rainydays for the wonderful replies. I truly appreciate them. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hi Jeffrey, this is even lovelier (if possible) with the nice image. (smiling) Rainydays |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Jeffrey! Good to see you, I loved this. I love Louis Lamour books and this is beautiful!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Awesome pic and great poem my friend. Nice to see you around. Jennifer Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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SouthernStar Junior Member
since 2000-10-30
Posts 23Georgia |
What can be said about this except it's wonderful. Enjoyed it much. Tessa |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ This is just wonderful. What images jump into my mind. Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jeffrey- wow...i love this. you've painted quite a picture with so very few words. wonderfully done. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jeff...nice to know you are still around...nice write as well |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Beautiful vision of words Liz |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you all for the wonderful replies |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jeffery, sorry I am late on this one. I am so glad to see you back and posting again. I like the new pic too! A great wekcome back poem indeed... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Hey that's pretty good Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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