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Ron K. Fox
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0 posted 2000-10-30 07:57 AM


On a table dressed for love's own feast,
Baked desire and roast passion beast,
Sweet kissed muffins, to be passed,
And warm love pudding saved for last.
Set with silver utensils, with which to dine,
Waiting for the moment, so refined.
Fork and knife, elegant, will always be
Used to sate the hunger in harmony,
But a spoon is what I’d chose for us to be,
For dessert is best, at least to me.
To be dipped in love pudding, what a treat,
To be enjoyed by smacking lips, it can’t be beat.
Sweet tooth calmed,
Satisfied for the day,
The feast now over,
We’d be spooned together,
And tucked away.



Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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1 posted 2000-10-30 09:11 AM


RonK~ this is FANTASTIC!! I loved the creativity here! Very well written!   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-30 09:40 AM


I've never got real excited over silver utensils but now that you say it this way I'll pay more attention when I eat. This is very good. I hope I don't get too excited over dessert.
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3 posted 2000-10-30 10:13 AM


a cute one indeed Ron..loved it..
and dont forget the chocolate kisses haa..

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Ron K. Fox
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4 posted 2000-10-30 08:55 PM


just bumping it up...feel like having fun today...hope you guys don't mind.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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5 posted 2000-10-30 09:06 PM


Very imaginative, Ron!  

Denise

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