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The Mirror of Thine Eyes
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The Mirror of Thine Eyes |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Mirror of Thine Eyes 'tis it right for poet's or artist's eye that which takes up and within a scene or are we to discern that all reality is just a fabrication of your dream do we see with our heart and spirit blithe those words to share as we hear it light sung within our soul, this song sublime and give it cause to come in rhyme would with thee I inhabit such delight if I were to eye thee so in candle's light to mirror in me your satisfaction just in that thee would see this reflection of trust now please Sire, see, in these eyes of green this, thy trust I have, this, thy love, serene this, my heart for you, and this thy passion's flame all of which abides, is in your reality's dream O do please share with me the twinklings of these thy spirits that roam in your dreams Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My friend, if I were to share my dreams with you of my faceless dream mate, you would be wisked away on the tail of comets and taken on a ride through the outer reaches of the heavens. You would see unicorns playing in fertile fields of moss and dragon slayers riding the stallions of white to rescue their love in the nick of time. There would be the clash of lightning with every kiss and the roar of thunder with every surge of passionate release. Are you so sure that you would want me to share my dreams on the blue pages with you now.  Excellent write....loved the images of reflected souls in this one. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in my dreams there abides one I may never find. . . Beautiful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, you DO make me believe in reincarnation sometimes. It's as if you were there.....  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, um, are you sure you just didn't do that very thing? Wow...your lady is quite a fortunate woman... Sven...I will hang a star for you upon which you may cast that wish for just the right dream to come true... thank you gentlemen... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, you snuck in on me...and yes, believe in reincarnation, and other planes, for who knows when we may have touched one another before...thank you, 'Deer Sir... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea. all I can say is beautiful O do please share with me the twinklings of these thy spirits that roam in your dreams loved this poem "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, thank you for all of your kind words... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, sigh...what more can I say. Beautiful. Sandra |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--exquisite writing my dear...I wish I could write like this! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cat, thank you for that...'tis needed, now and then... Martie...if I share, will you? LOL...thank you!!! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Karilea, this is such a splendid work... I can't help but read this so many times over and feel a surge of huge envy taking over me each time.... If only I could write as this.... regards, Sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the language of your write...I shall post one of mine later...your words whisper of love. Thank you for enlightening me this morning ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is even better than the best, utterly divine love, utterly beautiful. It's form shines, the words are like jewels each perfect of and in themselves, which together are simply stunning. I really love this one Kari, it's lovely. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, so glad to see you, our poetic friend...and your words give me much to strive for...thank you... Wynter, I whisper often...thank you for listening intently... Marsha...for you...I will continue to write as I am able, thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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