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When Your Heart Comes Home
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When Your Heart Comes Home |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When Your Heart Comes Home from time to time it can be so simple to lose the sentient keeper of your heart so many occurrences in each day so many things in which to take part so many great roles to play, so very little time if the keeper of your heart never calls you “mine” now and then you may forget to say to the steadfast keeper of your heart “I love you very much, my dear” and that loss can render you apart so very little time, so many great roles to play, if you as keeper of the heart, forget these words to say is it hard throughout the day to call your love, your friend? is it difficult to find a quiet moment in which to spend a hug, a kiss, or impart a loving whisper in their ear? wouldn’t you as a keeper, know in your heart this mend? so many great roles to play, so very little time if the keeper of your heart never calls you “mine” so if you have a home within your heart, and when you next take to heart your love then look into the eyes of this, your light and with God’s countenance from above admit there is very little time, the role you play is great and then thank God daily, my dear, to have your loving mate Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great work!! Sunshine..loving, outreaching, devoted writing....a captured mood of the sentiments as they flow by in the sweet oils of time......wonderful thoughts ....ethome. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Sunshine,This a gently written, but strong reminder for me to show appreciation to the mate that I love so very much. Thank you and I will take your advice. God Bless You, Bob <>< |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such a tender heart Karilea ~ words to remember always....Just beautiful. Bonnie |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is a warm and tender, reminder to love our loved ones. Deb |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is so tender, and so warm. And so truly said, how long does it take to say what needs to be said. I love this as always, utterly brilliant. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Karilea..this is a beauty, so soft and tender written...wonderful penned ... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely and tender Sunshine..enjoyed..  ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Beautifully expressed! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine. . . there are no words except. . . *sigh*. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A reminder I am grateful for - and one I think we all can use - beautifully expressed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I was reminded of Count your many blessings Count 'em one by one. Count your many blessings, see what God has done. A really good write, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--this is a beautiful reminder of how important it is to voice love. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do you folks realize that you all embody the very essence of understanding? That you have read, and responded so, tells me thus... so I thank you all for your kind comments... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A beautiful poem reminding us that we cannot take anything for granted, for it is so easy to lose what we have. It's so important to express our feelings verbally to all our loved ones Written so well by a loving heart Liz |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ This is wonderful.....Jon and I start each day with a hug and a kiss and the words I love you....we also end our days the same......  -SEA |
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