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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Resting my head On your lap Looking up through Your valley At your soft smile Mouthing my thoughts Feeling your sighs How you feel Just at the moment You know Your expectation You say you know By my look And then, Looking down To mossy cluster Sweet earthy scent Slow my journey down Pausing my mind On your desire Tongue tip extended Thinking of the storm To come from The trembling Clouds of you Things which matter most must never be at the mercy of things which matter least. ~ Johann Wolfgang Von Goethe ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
umm, ahem...it's getting a bit warm in here, no? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WHEW...steamy clouds... very nice Wil...indeed Resting my head On your lap Looking up through Your valley At your soft smile Mouthing my thoughts Feeling your sighs How you feel Just at the moment You know Your expectation ================= you have captured the chemistry well and the anticipation. excellent expressions here later-lost in the valley gator  jm |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Wilfred, sensual yet cerebral moments captured expressively well, the erotic quality of this piece makes for lovely reading/dreaming/remembering... thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Wilfred-- this one ummm got a bit hot i'd say  .very nice poem indeed. you've penned the longing quite well. take care. ~amy~  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I always enjoy your poems very much.Liked it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--What an enchanting metaphor to read on this rainy day...turned the temperature up a few degrees I think. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is lovely...sensual... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea- It's a very chilly late October here - had to turn up the heat - ThanksJM - And to think I flunked Inorganic 202 - At least I learned my Biology Thank youlater - deep in the valley -gater Rainydays- Chilly days indoors - wrapped in warm thoughts - My mind recalls too - Thank you Aimster Lady- an appropriate amount of heat for such a day I hope thank youvandana- May I continue to please - Thank you so much Martie- When my glasses are fogged - I know I'm in the clouds - Thank you ;O Paula- I'm glad if I pleased - Thank you |
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