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Paradelle Parallel or Poet Hell
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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paradelle parallel paradelle parallel road that leads to poet hell road that leads to poet hell that parallel poet road leads to paradelle hell twisting turning darkened street twisting turning darkened street navigate maze or face defeat navigate maze or face defeat navigate twisting turning defeat or face darkened maze street endless circular journey it seems endless circular journey it seems haunting sound...repeated screams haunting sound...repeated screams haunting journey repeated seems circular sound...it endless screams endless maze repeated seems twisting road or darkened face parallel journey that leads to circular sound haunting defeat navigate turning poet street paradelle hell...it screams -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~  And another case of Tylenol bites the dust ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow!  You did a great job with this!! I really like this kind of poetry. -SEA |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Dayum, Vic....this one ROCKS! I could definately see this one being read in some blackened coffee shop, lone mike your sole companion in a soft circle of light, seeing slight reflections off glasses in the night, hammering out the tempo, tempo, tempo, mucho gusto, whip it, shape it, serve it red raw and steaming.....WHOA...there I go again.... Long and Short: Me likes mucho.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, Vicky! Whew! These sure seem hard to do! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a victory in patience and perserverence. I think each of us who wrote a paradelle should get an award, don't you? Excellemt work, Vicky Liz |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW! Excellent Vicki! What a wonderful style, and you've woven it so perfectly ... really well done indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
THIS ROCKS...screams to be read aloud....shi--oot! gotta find the key to this...mutter, murmer, sigh...I'm loving this form....and you did this beautifully...sigh...well done luvie! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well well well, it seems that either you have no problem with these or it is a sign that I should go but stock in tylenol corp. Excellent paradelle AGAIN my friend |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Paradelle or Poet hell...I know exactly what you're talking about! I've been in it for days now and still screaming! Very nice job! I'm jealous! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- LOL...extra strength even... i'm actually finding these kind of fun...i can't resist a challenge. glad you liked. SEA- thank you, my friend. really glad you enjoyed. Alicat- wow! i'm flattered...such kind enthusiastic words from you. thanks so much, my friend. Denise- well...i can't say they're easy, but i do love a challenge. glad you like. Liz- YES!! i agree...so when is that awards ceremony anyway?? lol thanks so much, my friend. Kit- wow...thank you so much for the enthusiastic reply...i really appreciate it. really glad you enjoyed. serenity- my frustrated friend...i'll keep my eyes open for that key your lookin' for...lol. thank you so much for the kind words. your replies really mean alot to me. Mark- hmmmmm...Tylenol stock aye? maybe not a bad idea...lol. actually i'm having a blast with these. glad you like it. hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Viraynes, Hey , I am really impressed,( not that I thought any different)An interesting , invocative , insight that leads us to believe. Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Applaud .....*WOW*.....you have done a great job.....love this style and its woven perfect.....great piece from your hand..... Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Vicky A paradelle paradigm. And I haven't begun mine yet  Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yikes! this is just scary up and stuff! lol this "padiddle" stuff has got me baffled...me of simple writes....! but you, my poet friend are the master of padiddle!..i dubb you such  hugs, dg "after a while, you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul..." -V A Shoffstall |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
heehee..just read alicats two cents..LOL (sshh....i think he likes your padiddle tricks.. )hugs, me |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Vicky, I'm with Dee here, I cannot do these things, I have such a simple brain. This is so marvellous, well done, and loud congratulations. I really like this Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This would make a great song! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well you make them look easy ... and they are not... I noticed how perfect they are for Halloween poems tho.. must be why Nan picked them for this months workshop... shes so smart  must be why shes the teacher huh?  loland Id say your the student at the head of the class on this assignment.. great job Vicky... jm |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Doc- thanks so much. really glad you enjoyed this. Charisma- wow...thanks for the enthusiastic response. i really appreciate it. glad you like. Kethry- well i just read yours, and i must say you've done an awesome job. thanks for the kind words. glad you enjoyed this one. they are kinda fun aren't they? dg- ROFL...master of padiddle aye?.. well...thank you...i think...lol. you should try one of these little guys...challenging but fun. you're such a silly little friend. hugs and stuff. Marsha- thanks so much for the kind words. i'm so glad you enjoyed this. Irish Rose- wow...really? thank you so much for the compliment. glad you like. Janet Marie- wow...thank you, my friend. your kind words really mean alot to me. yes...these haunting little ditties are perfect for halloween. i'm having a great time with them. hugs to you. thanks again all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Debbie- wow...i am so sorry. i don't know how i misssed you up there...you must have snuck in on me during my first reply. anyway, thank you so much for the kind response...i really do appreciate it. these paradelles definitely are a challenge, but kinda fun at the same time. glad you enjoyed this one. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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