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Flidais
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 9
Durham, CA

0 posted 2000-10-29 02:20 PM


Love is like a rainbow
There in an instant
When raindrops meet the sun
At the precise angle
That creates a prism of colors in the sky
It spreads across the blue in glory
Each color bleeding into the nest
Like each love-filled day
Slow, luxurious, content
And then it begins to fade
From the Earth up to the Heavens
The colors leaving no sign of their existence
And when it disappears into the sky
All that's left
Is sadness.

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-29 02:30 PM


Ahhhh, but when you find the right one then it closely hugs the earth but still shines in all it's beauty.  Lovely write.








[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-29-2000).]

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-29 02:34 PM


Beautiful and sad...A love soon departed. It's a sigh of the heart.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-10-29 04:41 PM


this is both beautiful and sad.
but when you find real true love, it
doesn't have to end. i hope you find
what your heart seeks and i wish you
much happiness. hang onto the faith,
it will get you through the hard times.

welcome to passions. take care.

~amy~  

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