Open Poetry #10 |
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The Rainbow |
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Flidais New Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 9Durham, CA |
Love is like a rainbow There in an instant When raindrops meet the sun At the precise angle That creates a prism of colors in the sky It spreads across the blue in glory Each color bleeding into the nest Like each love-filled day Slow, luxurious, content And then it begins to fade From the Earth up to the Heavens The colors leaving no sign of their existence And when it disappears into the sky All that's left Is sadness. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhh, but when you find the right one then it closely hugs the earth but still shines in all it's beauty. Lovely write. ![]() [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Beautiful and sad...A love soon departed. It's a sigh of the heart. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is both beautiful and sad. but when you find real true love, it doesn't have to end. i hope you find what your heart seeks and i wish you much happiness. hang onto the faith, it will get you through the hard times. welcome to passions. take care. ~amy~ ![]() |
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