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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"Love's Mirror" Embraced by solemn sacred pledge each whisper cut a bevelled edge Each murmer shared between our lips cast silvered sheet on fingertips And framed within sweet tinted trust reflections of two hearts were thrust As deep in dreams of azure blue I looked upon myself in you Rainydays |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainyDays~ This is an absolutely beautiful reflection of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Rainydays...this is such a great poem with some wonderful moments in it: Each murmer shared between our lips cast silvered sheet on fingertips This image struck me in particular. Thanks for the read  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I like what I see through my looking glass. I'm enjoying your work. Keep it up. Krissie I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making you lose ur way I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel ~Touch and Go |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Gentle, peaceful and real. Mike |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Marge, thank you very much, kind lady. Severn, oh my, and a quoted passage! I'm glad to know you enjoyed this. Thank you! Krissie, I am so enjoying reading all the shared poetry here. Thank you! Mike, thanks for reading this little piece. Now the realness is mostly a memory, but remains vivid. Thank you! Rainydays |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Rainydays~ what a beautiful description of pure love... wonderful write. Deb |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Rainydays~ you've penned true love here both beautifully and accurately! this is a breath-taking poem. the grace in with which you write with is amazing. looking forward to reading more of your poetry. take care. amy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Im sorry to hear this is just a memory...but such a sweet one it seems to be...I really enjoy your writing |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Bloomingrose, thank you for reading my little verse today. (I like your screen name!) Amy, you're so generous with your words. I thank you and look forward to reading your work as well. Paula, yes, a sweet memory it is. Thank you for your kind response! Rainydays |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rainydays, what a great little poem this is, smooth and loving. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hello Kethry, and thank you for your thoughtful response. Take care, Rainydays |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
very beautiful poem. touches the heart gently. leaves you smiling. Ron |
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LoriJaye Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 34Massachusetts USA |
Loved this. Great imagery! =) LJ "A smile is when your inner beauty comes outside." |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Rainydays, A very moving poem, I enjoyed it very much. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Very tender piece, you have written from the heart Tracie~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How did I miss this one? I liked it a lot... Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Ron, to be told that something I have written has provoked a smile provokes the same in me. Thank you! LoriJaye, thank you very much! Daniel, thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this! Tracie, yes, written from the heart...don't we all? (smiling) Thank you! Elizabeth, I am glad you consider it a poem that you are pleased to have found! Thank you! Rainydays |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
tender words from the heart...pleasure to read this....well done. charisma |
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Flidais New Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 9Durham, CA |
Beautiful. Simply beautiful |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Rainydays, a reflection worth seeing. . . wonderful writing. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Purity in love offers the clearest reflection always. What a wonderful verse and what an intriguing look into your mirrored heart. Loved it. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Charisma, thank you. It is surely a pleasure to be here, I am enjoying the sharing of verse. Flidais, your "beautifuls" are wonderful to "feel"...thank you! Sven, thank you for your warm words. Mark, thank you very much. Sometimes it is only in the reflection of love that we are able to find our own. Rainydays |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Rainydays, this is poetry. Old Balladeers can ramble on but I think the pure poetry is taking a minimum amout of words and making each one count to produce the desired effect. You have dome this here in a very admirable way.....I salute you, my friend |
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