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The Mire a Lion - Let Rome Burn
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The Mire a Lion - Let Rome Burn |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Limping from her regimen Running on adrenaline Engine pumping RPMs pinion of her empire turns the neon flashing lip merge Inner loins pining nine day surge now seven The mire is a lion Roar She's nipping at the rhyme The linens running Like the nile Leaning on the iron The irony Of lines Lies She's running On adrenaline Unplug the girl She's gulping pens The nipple plug to Rome of Poems Her menu rings lingo In dreams of grins wide Let her open like Nero Rome can roll in ions Luring languid neurons What say? Filet the rules mignon The men were non Hung loping ruin She alone The noel rumen The mire a lion Let Rome Burn [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey Wings!! you've got some really great lines in this one... "Running on adrenaline Engine pumping RPMs pinion of her empire turns the neon flashing lip merge Inner loins pining nine day surge now seven" "Her menu rings lingo In dreams of grins" damn!!! the way you put words together... the way they sound and the raw power of them... geez... it's good, Distant Rebellious Poet... very very good. awwww hell... could you tell i like you? er.. i mean, could you tell i like it? LOL *wink* thanks for the Burn... this one's HOT! and i ain't Lion!  |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I feel the columns shaking, like heat-bent pistons breaking on this one.X-cellent! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Y'know what? I'm not quite sure, if am a Lion, or Christian...I don't know the boundaries-but till now, I don't think that I, ever thought the difference...i thank you much...for the think....with love to all. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
spank you fair poet.... spank you very much..!!  Ron -- appreciate the read man.. serenity -- Interesting what you've read in this one -- glad it inspired some introspection.. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! I felt the power through these words Local Rebel ... I love the way you've woven this together. I read this a few times, just enjoying the flow and pattern of the words. Really well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is one that needs to be studied as well as read, and I mean that as a compliment! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I can taste the rubber burning... very hot... excellent images and poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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