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Nocturne
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"Nocturne" Eager earth yields loamy, cool. Inviting pull urges small bare feet forward, a promise with fall of each step. Cotton gown, white illumined blue in moon's light skims sleeping violets awake. Dampened hem laces delicately between dawn and night. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ohhh this is a very cool poem... love the mystic quality of it ... excellent imagery, could feel it all perfect title great piece of work here RD take care jm |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Oh! Thank you, Janet Marie, I didn't realize anyone had read this yet! I'm glad to know you enjoyed my little poem of pre~morning reverie this morning. (smiling) Rainydays |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh RainyDays ... what delicate and beautiful imagery you've painted in this piece! You've set such a calm and soothing mood with these words, very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Rainydays..looking forward to reading more of your poems.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Rainydays, your work is always so beautiful. Great way to desribe the morning. I could just imagine the mist sweeping over the land and settling as dew on the grass. Excellent work. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
You paint a victorian scene beautifully. very visual. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Kit, thank you very much. I'm glad you were able to feel the mood of this piece. It was a serene, though somewhat anticipatory aire that set me to writing it after a walk outside in the wee hours before light. (shhhhhh...don't tell anyone!) Victoria, thank you for reading this one. I've had a full schedule lately and was away almost as suddenly as I found you folks, but am hoping to "stay" for a while longer this time. I am enjoying reading, so much! Elizabeth, you definitely have a poet's vision. Thank you for your gracious response! Ron, thank you. This particular scene was quite easy, as it was fresh in my mind. Thank you for reading it! Rainydays |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Breeze of soft morning dew Residing on cheeks of you Early rise to promised day Heart full of words to say Gown flowing of cotton white Trail of wonders left in sight Steps of visions touching earth Giving heart's love a new birth ====================== Gotta tell you, I love your style of writing and the natural way in which you pen your heart. Lovely verse yet "AGAIN" from you. You have a true fan in me for sure. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
serene and breath taking.... "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
RD, what lovely peaceful words, so well put together. I enjoyed it greatly. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Mark, my goodness! (smiling) Another tender, poetic response ... you are good! Thank you for reading this one closely enough to write this beautiful accompaniment. I am terribly flattered! Brian, thank you so much. I'm happy to know the serenity came through for you. Thank you for letting me know it. Dee, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you very much! Rainydays |
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