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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Wretched Paradelle wretched Paradelle my exercise in grief this is my exercise in grief this is this paradelle exercise, is my wretched grief. My mind is vacant my mind is vacant brain befuddled by dead thought brain befuddled by dead thought vacant brain is thought dead by my befuddled mind. The end is near the end is near, I really need satisfaction I really need satisfaction the satisfaction that I need, is really near the end. My brain dead mind is befuddled by vacant near- paradelle, my grief is this wretched thought, the end satisfaction is that I really need the exercise! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Debbie, what a great way to exercise your mind. Now that you've built the track you can go round and round for hours. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Maybe I need to say a prayer to the Paradelle gods or something. . . Only two days left!!! Great Debbie. . . could you write one for me??  --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Bravo Debbie! Wow ... you guys are amazing me with this style. Well done indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Kethry, that's exactly what I did! I'm dizzy from the effort! Sven, thanks, but I don't think I'll ever try to write one again! (once is enough for me!) Kit, thank-you, I agree, I have read some beautiful Paradelles by others since this exercise began. I think I'll leave this to the experts from now on! Whew! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Debbie~ And another case of Tylenol for the exercise ! These are excruciating to do, as we have found out. Liking the rise to the challenge ... oh, yeah ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Debbie...did you say hell???? Looks to me like your doing fine there...gal great writingsTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Back to the top Debbie! I'm so proud of you! Everytimes I start, something else comes out...lol...I'm very impressed. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Debbie~ this is fantastic...I keep thinking I'll get around to trying this...then I get a headache! Ugh!  -SEA |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Serenity and SEA, If I can do this (and not very well) anybody can! c'mon and give it a try! |
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