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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Pale yellow moonlight, spotlighting the path < !signature-->to our secret hideaway, following blue hair grass The fragrance of honeysuckle, alive in the air crossing over the bridge, bougainvillea everywhere Walking through the trellis,in a distance you can see blossoms of wisteria, falling down around me As your shadow draws near, I run into your arms just the locust singing, I feel your body so warm A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful, Victoria. Sometimes I think I need a place like that.  Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Victoria, what a hideway you have described, it just unfolded as a picture before me. Beautiful!!! Bonnie |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Victoria, I appreciate your poetry!!How can one not romance the notion of love!! Lovely. "Walking through the trellis,in a distance you can see blossoms of wisteria, falling down around me" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love your description, and I really enjoyed it, wonderfull penned with love in your heart......well done. Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful Victoria. . . We all need a place like this. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Where did you say this was??? Beautiful soft words you write. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The fragrance of honeysuckle, alive in the air crossing over the bridge, bougainvillea everywhere Walking through the trellis,in a distance you can see blossoms of wisteria, falling down around me As your shadow draws near, I run into your arms just the locust singing, I feel your body so warm ================ Victoria, this is very lovely... superb imagery... you packed a lot of images and emotions in a few perfectly expressed and chosen word. this "brief" poem makes a lasting impression impact...intensity poetry in motion take care jm |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hello Victoria, this is indeed a lovely scene you have allowed us to visit. Reminds me, upon first reading, of the gazebo and surrounding grounds in "The Sound of Music"...such an aire of romance! Thank you. Rainydays |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Lovely indeed!!! When I'm tired of the scenery around here... all I need do is visualize this scene!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a wonderful scene you paint! Love in bloom among flowers in bloom....a terrific combination, at that!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Elizabeth.. well maybe you will find one real soon... Bonnie..if i had one..thats what i would like it to be like haa..thank you so much Alle..i am always happy when someone says they enjoy my poetry..so nice of you to say.. Charisma..thank you..nice to hear from you Charisma..glad you liked.. Sven..youre darn tootin we do.. thank you Sven.. haa...  Nakdthoughts..Cant tell you that Its a secret remember haa.. thank you nakdthoughts. Janet Marie..thank you Janet Marie..so glad you enjoyed,nice to hear from you.. Rainydays..thank you..I am happy you enjoyed..hope you are enjoying passions.. Peppermint..Thats a great idea haa..thanks alot for reading Balledeer..love the way you wink haa..thank you A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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