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The Kiss of Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Kiss Of Dark… 'twas a dream, this I know but be it then, thus be it so he came upon me in dark of night and with a kiss, held me tight 'neath his fervored hand was wrought the devil's touch as he sought the nape of neck as hid by cowl and in the dark, screeched the owl O the words were soft of promise and dark eyes did then unite us a taste of love 'twas all he wanted but his kiss has left me haunted O, my Count, do not leave thy side 'tho 'tis in dream you do abide and in the daylight you shall hide but in the dark, we shall fly… Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Awesome, one of my favorite fantasies.. I really like the way you composed this, so seductive.. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, very dark, but very captivating. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
eerily beautiful. I vant to...never mind...nicely done. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow what dreams you must have. Bet you can't wait for the dark of night. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the kiss of night. . .soft and seductive. . . I know that it's like this poem. . . wonderful. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow*.....I love this wonderful piece....it remains me....on my kisses in the dark....sweet ones....dreamy ones.... great work. Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is always most interesting to see which way poets and readers will interpret a poem...thank you everyone for taking time to read... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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