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1,735 Miles
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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1,735 Miles Crossing half the homeland passage of renewed chances carriage of care-worn cargo, pictures of vast expanses. Flat of fields, rise of hills flurries warn of coming storms climbing heaven’s guardians shawl of white, trees transform. More to this journey than miles, show of diamonds in the night surreal the canvas before us cast by the lone headlight. Road closed, one mile ahead spooned, we sleep together, turning to inner embraces undaunted by the weather. Morning arrives, glacial bright silent and soft the quilting though awake, we remain of one mind, dreaming. © 2000 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Dreams are powerful motivations... I like this, Corinne |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This is a gem, and a real nice read Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Through the cold, the harhness, the dead ends in life, just the dream of being together brightens it all. That's what i get from this. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Southern and Prometheus! Thank you, Ron, and you're very astute! Corine |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a journey, Corinne! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Corinne! Soft and lovely! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you Irish Rose and Denise! Corinne |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
As a journey should be - and so do I dream it too - well done Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
a wonderful journey of togetherness.  I think for you it will be fill with poetry, adventure and smiles. Park |
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