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The Kiss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Kiss There is the kiss and then there's the kiss Those that hit and those that miss. Of those that are laid on And those that are played on. The one that engrossed to me the most Was one of a dreams milepost. Impossible in time And still it rings my chime. It came to me in a scene and seem A rhyme a verse and a dream. An impossible coup. Impossible but true And at the end of my silver thread A wish of mine I thought dead. But it kissed me to live And freed me of captive. The kiss was like the damp of the mist Fragile moist and soft with insist. Soul touched soul at the core And then there was no more. And dry winds sweep the plain And the desert is back again. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Oh ... 'The kiss was like the damp of the mist Fragile moist and soft with insist. Soul touched soul at the core And then there was no more.' But ... when it lays in your memory like this, it must have been a BEAUT ! *Wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: How do you do that? Wow... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And at the end of my silver thread A wish of mine I thought dead. But it kissed me to live And freed me of captive. The kiss was like the damp of the mist Fragile moist and soft with insist. Soul touched soul at the core And then there was no more. And dry winds sweep the plain And the desert is back again. ================== this poetic kiss rings my chimes and a couple bells too  my oh my what an amazing set of poetic lips spoke this.... "The kiss was like the damp of the mist Fragile moist and soft with insist." man oh man...it dont get no better than "soft insist" baby... very cool Sy-guy...very... later-mystic-lip-gator jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
*SMOOCHES*  Beautiful poem, Sy! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, It was a beaut. *L* Karilea, Thank you for the WOW. *L* JM, I think I hear the chimes. Winkiewinkie *L* Dsnyder, And Smooches to you. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Pretty poem Throwing you kisses Hope it helps Liz |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is really wonderful...... Kiss me a little Kiss me long Kiss me powerful Kiss me strong........  -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOHHHHH yeah...felt this one clear to my toes... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thanks for the kisses. Sy Sea, Kiss, kiss, kiss. Paula, Such a nice comment. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Seymour, This is wonderful. Very cute..some smooch! "There is the kiss and then there's the kiss Those that hit and those that miss. Of those that are laid on And those that are played on." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- wow..that sounds like one heck of a kiss. this is just wonderful! i love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful, Sy! It is truly a pleasure to be able to read your work. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alle'Cram, Sorry it took so long to thank you. Vicky, Thanks for the WOW. Temptress, Thanks for the beautiful. |
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