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Halloween Friends (For PDV Challenge) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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The rustle of leaves scattering to the will of the wind, Give pause to skittish feet and haste to nervous darting eyes. Or was it something else , what could the eerie sound portend? Turning on a heel and spinning within each dark disguise, Wondering with exactly what they may have to contend. Hearts now pounding loudly while fears continue to arise, no light does shine about them, and just around the next bend beckons their destination , the place they all now despise. Whose idea was it anyway, surely not a friend Now wanting only to go home not caring for a prize Glances now are traded, wondering on who each can depend, Who would be the best ones for me to choose as my allies? The house loomed large before them now with nothing to impend Upon the door one hand did knock though thinking it unwise As soon as the door came open a horror did descend But it stopped for not a moment the Trick or Treating cries!!! [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent Treat!!!  |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Hey, you had me going for a second there! Whew! Thought some big nasty, baddie was gonna jump at me, but it was worse! FOURTH GRADERS!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!< !signature--> Much love all, Krissie ~*Those words... Oh, how I long to hear ...those words Tell me...*~ [This message has been edited by AniKay83 (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
and look what I can do now...lol  Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
o my god..its the half pint monters again...gotta buy some candy to fend them off. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ You are just getting that talent cranked up tonight ! ALRIGHT !  I loved the poem ... and the graphic is just too cool ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Save me..... from tomorrow, when I have to hang with about 300 under 10's in costumes, at the local mall, just to take my little granddaughters to something halloweeny.. Great imagination in this poem... Sandra |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh noooooo not the bad guys! Trick or treat! Give me something good to eat! hehehehehe Deb |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie, wow this is excellent my dear. A very enjoyable read Thanks Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
B O O [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I don't know whether to say EEEK or LOL! Wonderful suspenseful buildup to a great punchline Prometheus! A great read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Halloweeny Bump !! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Kit- I disguised it as best I could, but I bet you saw it coming.. Nancy- work that black magic! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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