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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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What I want - a moment, perfect timbre, a singular instance of focus during which I feel You - bereft of wrappings, a flavour most intimate. This. © 2000 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 10-28-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your free verse is perfection, Corinne. I'm inspired. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
That's what I want too. Good work, Corinne. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Corinne - Your talent with writing with such brevity and power - is rapidly increasing logrhymically - this is stunning - (you speak for me too ~S~) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dont we all darlin' ..dont we all.. but we all dont say it with such class and grace... ditto Wils comments as well.. awesome write C, truly perfect poetry jm |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Corinne, I see you are following the "Kiss" principle Keep it short and stunning. Well done! Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This has inspired me Corinne... thankyou...  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Corinne, this is wonderful. beautiful thoughts. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Short, simple, but not static...great! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, a wonderful piece... and I must admit that I find it most enjoyable reading poetry bereft of wrappings...  Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, my fellow Celtic muse! Thank you, Elizabeth! THIS is something I didn't know could exist, until now. Wow, Bill, thank you for such supportive words of encouragement! JM, thank you, dear lady, glad to see you here again! Kethry, thank you, so kind of you to say that! Severn, Brian, Sunshine, thank you! Park, hon, now I'm not talking about THOSE kinds of wrappings! LOL Corinne |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Magic What I have - in these dreams, savored moments, sharply focused when waking and I find that with you - real life is boundless, far beyond dreams' dimensions. Magic. © 10/29/00 RAM [This message has been edited by RAM (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Such a lovely write of the fulfilled heart. And Ram's poem is icing on the cake ... Now how about This Magic ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Well stated, well written!!! "Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind!"...Dr. Seuss Toddles123@aol.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
RAM, Thank you for the perfect reply, my sweet poetry man. Marge, - yes, indeed, yes! Corinne |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Splendid writing!!! Inspired me (is about me) Feeling This. twisted is her mind- warped is her body- only you can be the one to unwrap the ongoing feelings inside her only you can give her the yesterdays of tomorrow... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you for the poetic response, Nakedthoughts, glad to be of inspiration! Corinne |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ this is so amazing.... -SEA |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Thank YOU for the perfect inspiration, sweet poet Core. oooooo, I'm icing now, am I, Marge? thanksRick |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lick, Lick! heh, hee! Moi |
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