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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Passions howling winds steal my innocence forcing tears of hate from my eyes imbued with spirit foul I crouch unseen In the shadows of A crowd gone wild Clutching my tender heart protecting from the venom flying sorrows tears fall Lies buzz around me like wasps of deceit stinging fiery jabs scarring poet’s soul Crying out for a voice whispering in the dark pleading with you Why..why..why…. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
PDV* You're a class act! This is poetry in it's perfection...emotion and truth woven finely together~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Tears of hate- tears of sorrow A crying voice- For tomorrow?? A lovely and wonderful poem Sharon! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"why, why, why..." Yes, this one really got to me...repost from where? I don't remember this! That's it, lady, I'm gonna have to run a search on you...this was awesome! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A crowd gone wild, scarring poet's soul... the why's are painful... the poem is fantastic! |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Crying out for a voice whispering in the dark pleading with you Why..why..why…. ---------- Why are you gonna make me cry?! Oh my, this brings back memories. Not very good ones, at least the poem was good!!! Much love all, Krissie ~*Those words... Oh, how I long to hear ...those words Tell me...*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sharon this is fantastic! Worded just wonderfully!! Clutching my tender heart protecting from the venom flying sorrows tears fall I just love the whole durn thing! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
imbued with spirit foul I crouch unseen In the shadows of A crowd gone wild Great read...I was swept up in its theme. Robert Joseph |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Ouch...I felt the pain in this one if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sharon, I can't imagine any howling winds here invoking hate in you....you are too revered...and rightfully so  |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Poet, This, without doubt, is the most compassionate poem I have read from anyone at this forum. This isn't about you, it's about someone else and your hands are tied!! What a heart you have, ma'lady and I'm puffed up with pride to finally meet you. Hello, my name is Marcella. (smile) ps:it doesn't take a doctoral degree to deduce you weren't the victim. I do respect your thoughts and love your heart!!  |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sharon, this is a wonderful poem. Once again your words say something to me. I loved it. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sharon, powerful poem, excellent writing "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes.....always the ...why's can relate on that too..... you have expressed your feelings wonderful....loved it. ((hugs))) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sharon, stunning write here. Its the question that drives us and you have written so artfully about the question. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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