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With My Last Breath
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With My Last Breath |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~With My Last Breath~  As long as the moon glows and the stars shine a reflection of passion on the dance floor I'll save the last dance for you As long as birds sing in the spring and flowers bloom after the rain I'll go on loving you As long as there are whispers in the dark from loving lips that call my name I'll be there to share with you As long as mountains peak and rivers run I'll be there to care for you Until the last moment with my last breath I'll always love you BloomingRose |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
BloomingRose- this is so beautiful...such loving words from your pen.  really love this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rose, your love shines in these written words. Well done. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Ah, a rose is a rose is a rose. beautiful. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A beautiful poem about undying love. Marvelously done!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
we all find that special person sooner or later that we will love no matter what.. until our dieing day. lovely Deb.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Vicky~ Thank you so much for you kind words. Gentle Spirit~ Thank you, I hope so. Ron! Just a few huh? Thank you for reading. Glad you like. Poet deVine~ Thank you. Hoped to show love from the heart in this one. Glad you liked it. Victoria~ So true... and I think you can only love this deep, once in a life time. Thank you. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I do believe you have shown the love in your heart in this one. This is so sweet and so full of love. I know that there is one man out there today smiling real big and thanking the heaven's for you. Very sweet. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark~ Thank you. I hope I expressed what is in my heart. Think hubby will like this one? I hope so. Deb |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
BR,.."as long as", Lovely, lovely..you little romantic angel...Wonderful job! Marcy |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
A rose in bloom is a beautiful thing; no less so these words...which are beautiful too Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marcy~ Thank you so much for you kind words. I am glad you liked it. Peppermint~ Thanks and I am glad you liked the romance in it too. |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Wow what love! Thanks BloomingRose, my this bouquet never age. Jon |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Came back to add to my library and YES, I think hubby will love it and I hope you have shared it with him by now. You do know what love is and you have been given a gift to share it so purely. Wonderful write..now which shelf would you like in the library my friend? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening BloomingRose, A very beautiful presentation, and a wonderful writing. Lucky guy! Bill |
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