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You saw me vulnerable.
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You saw me vulnerable. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
I found me in you. A part of me I never knew. Losing me in you, my love only grew. Exposing my feelings to you. Speaking, I don't know what to do. Hold my hand, lets walk, we two. Teach me how to find me through you, the me I never knew. Until I found you. Let's share our lives and begin anew. Can't we start with, "I Love You?" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like the perfect place to start to me....so nice to see a happiness dwelling within you. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Mark-Thank you, happiness comes and goes, trying to keep more hold on the "happy". |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
In the beginning there was love.and don't forget the ending...4ever more. Ron |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Ron-Thank you for the upbeat 4ever, glad you liked. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh, love this! so perky and yes I agree, I see admirable traits and try tweaking my own..and also agree with Ron, love... Marcy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
When we fall in love we often see ourselves through new eyes...and become all the things we never thought we would be...a beautiful piece~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Alle'cram-Thank you for stopping by and for your kind response. Butterflies-I appreciate, you always have a way of understanding me, thank you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemini~ You write of a heart search that is well expressed. You'll find that happy starts within and is then shared with another to become joy. Anything, times two is more !  Enjoyed your feelings. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-Thank you, I so appreciate your tender thoughts. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We do tend to let a new love see the most vulnerable parts of us dont we? Kind of scary but thrilling at the same time...grat write |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it.....love is so beautiful... yes and when it happenend, you can only find yourself in your love. wonderful work. Charisma |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Paula-Yes Love is scary and exciting at the same time, thank you for visiting. Charisma-Thank you, love is open and intriguing and does expose the parts of a person that may not necessarily be seen by others. |
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