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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2000-09-25 08:21 PM

Restless
beneath a haze
  colourless, layers
upon layers of
    figure eight paths
         all leading in this case,
to Boulevards
   of fame

to Cali-for-NI-A
the world swarms
with the excitement
of bees
buzzing toward
         Tinsel honey pots
of downtown LA
   decorated with stars golden,
over strips of sunset that
echo voices
    of the reknown

a distraction,
  set for this city
of angel's,
where fantasy
becomes reality and
  reality hits that plush
red carpet
   flat on it's face

yes Andreas,
  beneath the dreamers
of platinum blonde and
metallic hues
    he trembles the
precious element
        of Hollywood

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-25-2000).]

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-09-25 09:14 PM

Welcome back Mmy...

and I can almost see the place thanks to you...and this poem

love you - glad you're home safely.

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."

From Jack Maggs

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 2000-09-25 09:35 PM

platinum blonde and metallic hues...your words strike a strong image in my mind, my friend. Exellent poem, I'm glad to see ya back!

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2000-09-25 10:21 PM

Hey, were you in LA...and if so, why didn't you tell me...there is tinsel here..for sure, but also real sad, dreamy, loving, sweet tempestuous life.

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 2000-09-25 10:23 PM

HEY ANGEL YOU'RE BACK!! WOOHOO!!!

O
=o) Great way to display it all for us!
O

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2000-09-25 10:29 PM

Dark Angel back from the City of Angels...no wonder the poem is angelic!! Great to see you, DA

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

6 posted 2000-09-26 12:29 PM

Awesome poem M!

You capture the images so well - it feels as if I have experienced LA after reading this. Well done and welcome home.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2000-09-26 10:57 AM

Whew...the title drew me in and the peom did not dissapoint

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-09-26 11:07 AM

Maree...sorry for the delay...so glad to have ya back, and this poem is awesome, m'friend...especially the Andreas...too cool.

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

9 posted 2000-09-26 11:54 AM

The title drew me in too..This was very vivid to the mind.

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

10 posted 2000-09-27 12:53 PM

Doing a sneaky and bringing this up...chortle...

And YOU know why Mmy...lol

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."

From Jack Maggs

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

11 posted 2000-09-27 02:50 AM

Welcome home little DA

Loved the poem...well done
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2000-09-27 05:42 PM

SB, Thank you for the welcome back hon... I am so glad to be back, I have missed you and my internet buddies so much. Thanks for your lovely reply

Krista, thanks so much for your lsovely reply, I am glad you enjoyed it ..Thanks again

Martie, yes I was in LA, please don't tell me you are from LA and I could've met you in person???? For I ill surely Jump of a bridge "so to speak" and Yes LA is indeed all that you said hon

Thanks for your lovely reply

ANGEL GIRL, YESSSS I am back WOOOHOO and so glad to be back

Glad you enjoyed it hon

Hi Balladeer, Thank you for your lovely reply and welcome

Hey J, thanks hon for the welcome home, glad to be home and have missed you and my internet friends, thanks for your lovely reply glad you enjoyed it

Ruth, I am glad the poem did not disappoint you

Thanks for your lovely comment hon. Miss ya!

hey Sista, glad you thought it was cool hon, thanks so much

and glad to be back!

KitKat, glad you liked it, thanking you very much

SB, yes honey I know WHY!

*hugs*
Thanks for bumping it back up

Tracie, thanks honey glad to be back home, nice to hear from you and thank you for your lovely reply

Thanks all I appreciate you taking the time to read so very much

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2000-09-27 08:12 PM

Yes, Maree..I do live in LA County...not that far...just a few miles. Could have met up with you somehow if I had known

...but don't do anything drastic, hon...I'll catch you next time. DARN!!

Poertree
Senior Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 1359
UK

14 posted 2000-09-30 01:45 PM

MM sorry it took me a while to catch up with you ...... a classic maree poem and very beautiful if i might say so ... well i'm saying so whether or not i might

thanks maree

P

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2000-09-30 07:41 PM

Welcome back Maree!!

Hope that you enjoyed your stay. . .

Wonderful poem my friend. . .

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