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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2000-10-26 12:28 PM



There's a tender magic
How we became intimate
Not in a physical sense
But so real
Feelings shared,
Deep and close

Barely a day goes by
We don't seek one another
Treasure the words
We pass between us
Comfort warm and abiding

Is it any wonder
I want more?
Can I imagine
Life without you
Not now
Not ever again

It goes beyond
Chemistry
Beyond scent
Past the realm
Of the senses
To where the logic
Is defied
And physical contact
Is demanded

There's a sweet mystery
Giving ourselves to each other
I can visualize
My hands move from hugs
To caresses, to holding clutch
Fingers kneading your buns
Then feeling yours gripping mine

There's a magic we know
Our lips press and tongues intertwine
Confluence of rivers
The electric static discharge
Well beyond chemical
No physicist can explain

Mystery or magic
I want to share the feeling
Of our hands on each other
Totally  commune
The total sensing
Of our lips as they kiss


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Sven
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1 posted 2000-10-26 12:30 PM


Wilfred. . . this is superb. . . I love it. .  .

Mystery or Magic?  Perhaps a little of both my friend. . .

Excellent. . .

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Paula Finn
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2 posted 2000-10-26 12:32 PM


So do I...what beautiful thoughts Bill
Ron K. Fox
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3 posted 2000-10-26 12:43 PM


You have one great one after another. Beautifully expressed. ron
Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-10-26 04:29 PM


uh-oh, another speechless comment...but a soft wow

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Wilfred Yeats
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5 posted 2000-10-26 08:42 PM


Sven-
I think perhaps - you're right  ~S~ - Thank you

Paula -
you always say nice things

Ron -
I appreciate you - really thank you

Karilea-
Uh-oh - thank you  


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6 posted 2000-10-26 08:55 PM


Excellent as usual, Bill...
Wilfred Yeats
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7 posted 2000-10-27 09:45 AM


Deer -
My humble thanks for such praise from you who I admire so much

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2000-10-27 11:59 AM


This is lovely...warm and intimate!  I enjoyed this very much, Wilfred.
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9 posted 2000-10-27 11:59 AM


Sweet love poem. Some woman has found a romantic soul in you. She better appreciate it..
Thanks for your support on my poem, also.
Sandra

Wilfred Yeats
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10 posted 2000-10-27 11:16 PM


Serenity-
Thank you - I only hope 'she' appreciates it as much as I believe it

Catalina -
I believe she does ~S~ -I live on that belief. Thank you

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