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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-10-26 10:38 AM


                       You're My Truth

           What can I say except truth
           You know I'm never ever shy

                                I'll tell you my truth as it is
                                Why would I tell a lie

           You're the canvas, if I'm the paint
           You're the sunset streaked across the sky
      
                                 You're the movement, if I'm the breeze
                                 You're the gentle zephyr on high

           You're the wing, if I'm the bird
           You're the only way I can fly

                                 You're the air, if I'm the breath
                                 You're the contented blissful sigh

           You're the blood if, I'm the heart
           You're the reason I have to try

                                 You're the sun, if I'm the day
                                 You're the warmth as you go by

           You're the star, if I'm the night
           You're the shimmer that doesn't die

                                  You're the music, if I'm the song
                                  You're the words that make me cry

           You're the light, if I'm the shine
           You're the sparkle in my eye
                
                                  You're the love, if I'm the life
                                  You're my truth there is no lie

                          Marsha



© Copyright 2000 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-10-26 10:43 AM


Togetherness. The lock and key. The wind and the rain. Such lovely words you create. Sweet as honey, with a bee to guard it. Ron


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2 posted 2000-10-26 10:44 AM


Marsha~ I just love this, it's beautiful. -SEA
juliet_2u
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3 posted 2000-10-26 10:52 AM


Marsha this is so soft and wonderful. I really really enjoyed it.
Juls

Marsha
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4 posted 2000-10-26 04:17 PM


Ron, yes that's what I mean the missing piece, that makes a whole. Thank you for reading, and I'm pleased that you understood.
              
SEA, MMMmmmm I'm glad because I like this one too. And thank you, truly
                    
Jules, Thank you for replying, I think this is another of those gift poems. I'm not sure where they come from, but when I'm passing time between one thing and another, I sort of doodle and when I look there it is. Still wherever they come from I'm grateful.
Take care
                  Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

peppermint35
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5 posted 2000-10-26 07:36 PM


Where do they come from except from a soul as beautiful as these lovely words!!!!

I truly, truly enjoyed this one; it's so very beautiful!!!

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

Tara Simms
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6 posted 2000-10-26 07:38 PM


What a tender expression of love!
Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2000-10-27 07:22 AM


WOWZERS....now that is some truth my friend.  So very beautiful in both verse and in thought.  Lots of love in this one for your special man.   Loved this one.
Marsha
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8 posted 2000-10-27 08:15 AM


Peppermint, thank you, I'm happy that you liked this one. And yes you are probably right they come from the soul, but I don't take any credit for this one truly.
                
Tara, thank you, and I'm pleased you like this one. It does contain a lot of love certainly, but then it would, because the more you give the more there is.  

Mark, my friend thank you so much, you know how I feel about your work, and how I value your friendship and comments. As for my special man, he's worth it, and then some.
Most definitely is he worth it! Oh and I'm really pleased you like this one, I must admit I do too.  
Take care
                  Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Alle'cram
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9 posted 2000-10-27 08:57 AM


Marsha, Marcella's sister,
and you put this smile upon my face!!
Great one.     Marcy

BloomingRose
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10 posted 2000-10-27 09:01 AM


Marsha,
Love you style here. Great poem!
Deb

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11 posted 2000-10-27 12:51 PM



Marsha, love is that way...the pleasant knowing of melding hearts. Lovely!

Robert Joseph

Marsha
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12 posted 2000-10-27 01:04 PM


Marcella, glad you liked it, Marcella my sister, likes it too. But being a sister she doesn't praise me much, it was more sort of, yes love, what else is new. I did tell her that her effusive comments were just too too much.
Take care Marcella, (Oh Marcella the sister goes under the nickname Marce the grass, you can tell what she was like can't you?)
                         
                  
Deb, glad you liked it, take care
              

Robert, Mmmm the other half of the whole, glad you stopped by and thank you
                  Marsha
                        
                



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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