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I Long For You
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I Long For You |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA 
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In the well, the rich, vibrant place The place where all creation begins, the Depths Depths of my spirit, heart, essence of my being My being is the place where I long for you Who are you, my Sweet Dream One? Are you a myth? Fantasy? Fabrication? Echos of your laughter, your magic song Shadows float before me, intangible Evidence remains, holds on firm Grips at my heart, so I know, I know The Eye of my Heart has seen you, Truth of the heart, Truer than True In the well, the rich, vibrant place The place where all creation begins, the Depths Depths of my spirit, heart, essence of my being My being is the place where I long for you I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment to pursue my own purpose and passion. |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
From the heart, Julie. I really like this one, I can feel it. Really good. passion is life. . . |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Julie, I love this! I've longed like this before and remember well the feeling. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Julie, I have longed like this. . . but I haven't decided if it's good or bad. . . Excellent writing. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Julie, Wonderful writing. I can feel the longing through your words. Hang in there my friend, you'll find him some day. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JJS~ Hey! ~ This is heartache down to an art.......wow.....stunning! -SEA |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Julie I feeling i know oh so well Thanks, Rich |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Passions Voice, thank you for your words of encouragement. I like your nick name, fits in with my website, http://www.5passions.com! Tara, this is not Soul's Longing! I am still working on that one! Sven, in the Eastern tradition, this longing is neither good nor bad, it simply is a state one is in.... Lone Wolf, I am touched that my words have become palpable to you. That is a great compliment! Thank you! Sea, THANK YOU! And how did you know my nicname JJS?! Rich, I appreciate your time in reviewing and responding to my work....hope to read lots of yours as well! With Purpose and Passion, JULIE I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment to pursue my own purpose and passion. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Who is he, this elusive one, and where does he hide. I have seen him too, but he fades before my eyes. Very enjoyable, and a feeling I know well. Sandra |
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StarGlow Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 40 |
Absolutely beautiful! S/b on Hallmark card. Star |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Echos of your laughter, your magic song Shadows float before me, intangible' Great lines penned here, Julie! I love the poem! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Julie, Wonderfully put together. I could see the longing throughout. Well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
JJS~ Such a beautiful piece, very lovely to read Tracie~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes, I can relate on this feelings either....you describe your feelings so wel......wonderful penned. Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This was a beautiful way to describe something that the majority of us have felt at one time or another....and I loved your mention that longing is neither good or bad ....it just is, I'm beginning to see that more and more. Great writing Julie~ |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Julie: What a spectacular description of creation at it's finest.. The anticipation, the longing for the inevitable. Wonderful job. Shawn Beacon of Hope! Your guiding light during life's troubling moments. www.yourbeaconofhope.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Julie, Sometimes, we just know, know from within, don't we? Oh, my! a perfectly beautiful creation you've penned. Excellent. Marcy |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Julie, your style, form and words are exemplary. This is truly an excellent piece of writing,,,, |
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