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When First We Met
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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 ~When First We Met~  In the ocean mist moonlight reflects on black water a pearl on velvet to light a pathway in the night Waves simmer beneath swirling seas nights not yet surrendered two lovers tread water to a secret place Cup the pearl in your hands a reflection of memories when first we met BloomingRose |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BR~ SO BEAUTIFUL!! Loved this!  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
a beatuful image is formed...as perfect a pearl. Loved it. Ron |
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LoriJaye Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 34Massachusetts USA |
Beautifully said...such a lovely image. =) LJ "A smile is when your inner beauty comes outside." |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Bloomingrose, Oh! how beautiful. I just think you get better and better. I cant wait for your next poem. "Waves simmer beneath swirling seas" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
SEA~ Glad you enjoyed. Thank you. Ron~ Thank you so much! LJ~ Thanks, I am glad you like it. Daniel~ Why thank you kind sir... |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is a beautiful way to remember. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening BloomingRose, This is absolutely stunning, I commend you on your work. Bill |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Those first moments between two lovers should always be treasured....seems like sometimes things just move in slow motion and other times fast forward. You got to hold onto that pearl tight and feel the moment to cherish it forever. Wonderful write my friend. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Blooming Rose, Everything about this is captivating. So lovely and romatic. Looks like a card to me! Marcy |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Tara~ Thank you. Memories can be beautiful. Bill~ Thank you for your warm compliment. I am glad you liked it. Mark~ Thank you, I believe for true love there are special memories like these. Marcy~ I am glad you like this. Romance and sweet memories go hand in hand. Thank you. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
so devive This is a very beautiful and tender piece BR...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Very lovely, very tender; I enjoyed it very much Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Could not let this slip by without a 'bravo' - great images:Moon =pearl on velvet The watery waves 'simmering' super write BR - keep it up! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Tracie~ Thank you for the tenderness you see And for reading. Peppermint~ Thanks and I am glad you enjoyed. I have to tell you everytime I see your name I think of the song "peppermint twist". Such a cute name. Wilfred~ Thank you, I am glad you read it and enjoyed. |
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