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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Without you… The stars glow The River flows The wind blows… The earth turns The sun burns The sea churns Without you. Without you... The eyes gaze A girl prays Her pain stays The eagle soars the lions roar my heart tore… no more.. Without you. The pain's wrong... It lasts too long.. life goes on.. but now I'm gone. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Oh dawn, a love gone wrong. please don't cry, hold that head up high, You must go on. I know its hard, when it seems like this. Just close your eyes and await the kiss. From the prince who before you one day will stand, Take you in his heart and in his hand. Time heals. Ron |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I dont know what to tell you cassers. Its a great poem, but I wish that you had not the inspiration to write it. Hang in there, life has its up sides too. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Dawn, Cheer up. Yeah! Life can bring on such hard times. BUT it is not always bad times. Smile a BIG SMILE NOW, and you will see there is a difference. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Dawn, this sounds about right. I feel it too. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful piece of work Cassers. I know you're going through a rough time right now, but keep your head up and you will make it through.  I love ya much. *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Thank you all for your kind comments. They mean a lot to me. I'm realizing what I must do.. as hard as it will be, its all there is left to do. Thank you again. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The heavy flow of emotions that ran from your heart to write this shows in every line my hope is that through your poetry and with the support you have from your friends here you'll find healing soon~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'The pain's wrong... It lasts too long.. life goes on.. but now I'm gone.' Moving on is the best, but the absolute hardest, thing to do. But we must, or we will remain stagnant and miss the day when the Right one comes along. Notice I say 'when' because it will happen! Excellently written! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
The hardest thing in the world to do is to let go when it's over and move on; but having written this and written it so very well....perhaps it is a good beginning. Have courage!!! Things will be easier day by day Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, another woman going through this heartache. I'm sorry for your pain. I have been a bit immersed in this lately also. It's hard to get over, hard to accept, hard to go on, hard to watch the world go on as though nothing happened. But we will survive, I know it. Take care. Sandra |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is sad, but for every flower that dies a new one grows. Hugs, Deb |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Thank you all for your kind words. The strength you all have given me goes with much gratitude. Moving on is hard, but well worth it.. thanks so much. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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