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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
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The Horsehead Nebula

0 posted 2000-10-25 07:31 PM



Without you…
The stars glow
The River flows
The wind blows…

The earth turns
The sun burns
The sea churns
Without you.


Without you...
The eyes gaze
A girl prays
Her pain stays

The eagle soars
the lions roar
my heart tore…
no more.. Without you.

The pain's wrong...
It lasts too long..
life goes on..
but now I'm gone.


"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


© Copyright 2000 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved
Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-25 07:37 PM


Oh dawn, a love gone wrong.
please don't cry, hold that head up high,
You must go on.
I know its hard, when it seems like this.
Just close your eyes and await the kiss.
From the prince who before you
one day will stand,
Take you in his heart and in his hand.

Time heals. Ron

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
2 posted 2000-10-25 07:38 PM


I dont know what to tell you cassers.  Its a great poem, but I wish that you had not the inspiration to write it.  Hang in there, life has its up sides too.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
3 posted 2000-10-25 08:10 PM


Dawn,
Cheer up. Yeah! Life can bring on such hard times. BUT it is not always bad times. Smile a BIG SMILE NOW, and you will see there is a difference.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
4 posted 2000-10-25 08:41 PM


Dawn, this sounds about right.  I feel it too.
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
5 posted 2000-10-25 09:34 PM


Wonderful piece of work Cassers.  I know you're going through a rough time right now, but keep your head up and you will make it through.    I love ya much.  

*Krista Knutson*

"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar."
Helen Keller


Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
6 posted 2000-10-25 10:10 PM


Thank you all for your kind comments.  They mean a lot to me.  I'm realizing what I must do.. as hard as it will be, its all there is left to do.  Thank you again.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
7 posted 2000-10-25 10:30 PM


The heavy flow of emotions that ran from
your heart to write this shows in every line
my hope is that through your poetry and
with the support you have from your friends
here you'll find healing soon~

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
8 posted 2000-10-26 08:04 PM


'The pain's wrong...
It lasts too long..
life goes on..
but now I'm gone.'

Moving on is the best, but the absolute hardest, thing to do.  But we must, or we will remain stagnant and miss the day when the Right one comes along.  Notice I say 'when' because it will happen!
Excellently written!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
9 posted 2000-10-26 08:08 PM


The hardest thing in the world to do is to let go when it's over and move on; but having written this and written it so very well....perhaps it is a good beginning.

Have courage!!!  Things will be easier day by day

Peppermint
Life is a Wheel

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2000-10-26 08:14 PM


Oh, another woman going through this heartache. I'm sorry for your pain. I have been a bit immersed in this lately also. It's hard to get over, hard to accept, hard to go on, hard to watch the world go on as though nothing happened. But we will survive, I know it. Take care.
Sandra

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
11 posted 2000-10-26 08:22 PM


This is sad, but for every flower that dies a new one grows.
Hugs,
Deb

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
12 posted 2000-10-26 09:09 PM


Thank you all for your kind words.  The strength you all have given me goes with much gratitude.  Moving on is hard, but well worth it.. thanks so much.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


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