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Smack-a-thon |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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One fateful day down "By the Sea" Deer, Sy, and LngJhnAg Imbibed a bit too much to see They'd turned to scalawags. Sy found himself smacked 'midst the three 'Pon left cheek Balladeer On right LngJhn concurrently Sy needed one more beer.  Course LngJhn thought decidedly That this could be more fun If in betwixt it might be he Beware that silver tongue. Tale's told these days you'll likely see Him 'bout the countryside. Else soon as naught he's bound to be Awaft upon the tide. I found him here just recently Sails furling back and forth Reciting pirate's poetry His ship's stern headed north With Lorelei and much Chablis They stopped to stomp grape pod At Martha's Vineyard Winery Abreast of Old Cape Cod. Then LngJhnAg did smile with glee 'Twas time to launch his plan. Besmacked by Lorelei and me Two ladies smooching man... The lasses thought mischievously, "Let's take this far and near" In chants of musing harmony, "All righty - Next comes Deer"  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Morning Nancy, You are certainly very talented, not only in your writings, but also with your manipulation with the computer. A very great posting Nancy, keep them coming. Bill |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Nan, nobody told me about the smack-a-ton. WOnderful poem Nan, save a place for me next time LOL "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ WONDERFUL !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey, where do I get in line at? |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful poem and pics Nan! What a treat to "see" as well as read of these tales ... the genuine comraderie shines through in both pictures and words ... loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, Fabulous, both the pics and the poem. be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
CUTE!!!!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, Thankya Bill Inc - I'll soitenly try..  brian - OK - Your spot's reserved..  Marge - Ain' life grand??.. Mark - I'd say right after Bill & brian - First come, first served here.. Kit - Thankee - We do cavort a bit, don't we? Kethry - Glad you enjoyed... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ROFL - Indeedy-do: I remember the first picture... but for some reason... like the second one better... No offense Seymor... LOL |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful poem, Nan! Great pictures too! Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SMOOCHES, SMOOCHES, everywhere, but not a kiss for me....(pouting) Loved it Nan...quite insightful...and I will opt, for what's behind door number three....*wink* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Damn, here I was slowly nodding off and then you made me laugh...  HUSG |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Nan-This is just too special!, I liked it very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, You are a wonder. And If your spot in my heart grows any larger, I'll need a double bypass. Once more wonderful, love Sy |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
simply delightful - you never cease to amaze me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nan--loved the poem and the pictures...thanks for this look at passion. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Nan! OMG! You have ignited a little part of me here, this is a wonderful work you've done...to see these faces here, in happy times...thank you much |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Nan* This was great...the poem alone would have been enough to rave about but the photos of those that we adore....a fabulous addition!!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
smack-a-thon...I should have known to look for the play on words... too cute, nan...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Having a busy time down in Chattanooga, but not too busy to give Nan another big "smooch"...this time from me..for a job well done. We have met some terrific people in our travels...and Nan rates highly. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
As for standing in line, fellas - fuhgeddaboutit - I'm keeping this down a one-man line as much as possible - we wouldn't want Sy to get a reputation as a slut, now would we??? What's that? A line for Nan??? ohhhh... well, then, nevermind - lol. As far as a line for Lorelei - well, she runs her own line and doesn't need any help from me. So, if you wanna stand in her line, go ahead. But you might be waiting for a long time - lol. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is NOT right!!!! I'm the Balladeer and I haveta kiss Sy while the sailor gets the ladies slobbering all over him! I want equal time!!!! Susan! Nan! Play bookends with me, too! Sy doesn't shave!!!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
PdV - The guy? or the house?.. Christopher - Shhhh - You'll hurt Sy's feelings... Denise - A fun day was had by all... thanks.. serenity - SMOOOOOOOOOCHES... RG - If I can make you smile, my day is a success... Gemini - Thankee... These people are pretty special.. Sy - I'm just sorry I missed the first round.. .. SMOOCH... Wil - Watch yer back, my friend - Ya never know where we'll show up next.. Martie - Thanks - It's a passionate group all right.. passing shadows - Thank you - for enjoying.. Butterflies - Thanks - This seemed like the pics would make it a wholistic experience, ya know??... Sunshine - Moi? Playing with words? Soitenly - and thanks.. Lorelei & LJA - Luv ya both... Deer - Better watch out!!!... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah... Long John needs another smack (Right on those cheeks he keeps in back) Smooch on, ladies... hold him steady... suthern's got her paddle ready!! *G* Loved this one, Nan... And the pics are great! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
smack-a-ton.... what about me... I love smooches... as you can see.....  loved the pic....and also the poem.....superb. Charisma |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hiya, Nanners. This was simply exquisite! ALL OF IT!  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
too cool for peanut brittle school yuh |
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