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To My Daughter
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To My Daughter |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
To My Daughter You are daddy's little girl You are such a little pearl You are part of your mother Like you there is not another You are one of a kind Always on my mind You were a sight to behold As you crossed my worlds threshold You came into the world so bold I have found much joy In the hugs you freely give In the songs we sing The curiosity in your eyes The pranks you pulled The laughter it brings As I take you from pigtails To wedding bells You will always be My own little angel Daddy's little girl I love you |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Alan...so much tenderness and love here...she is a lucky girl to have a daddy such as you |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Nice poem, and it's wonderful to read of such love. Jon  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i still remember my father crying when i got married..well it looks like you have gained a son..hope they will be very happy Alan.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Paula......I am the lucky one to have her as a daughter Jonmcm...thank for reading it and your kind words Victoria.....So far so good....it has been 4 yrs and I still miss her...but they are happy...thank you |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is heart rending, and beautiful words. Thank you for sharing this with us. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Irish Rose.....She is still my baby at 25..... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what is more precious than the love between father and daughter. you expressed your feelings so well. charisma |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, so sweet and tender...lovely poem! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Charisma...thank you.I have found nothing that compares Martie......Thank you for reading and your kind words |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Alan, You are such a good Dad, she must treasure you so much. Well done! Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Daniel.....but I can only hope to be as good a dad as she is a daughter |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Alan, this is so so precious. And I do understand the feeling. My first baby is 18 and I just watched her give birth to her first baby and whewwww that was really something. But as you said, she will always be my baby.. Lovely poem and so nice to see a Dad loving his child this way. Juls |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Juls. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alan~ I am such a daddy's girl....this is so touching and lovely.  -SEA |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Alan, Your daughter is a very blessed child to have you for a daddy. Beautiful poem. Deb |
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