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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Pacing to and fro Completely out of control Clenching hands to fists Gritting of teeth Nails dig in, blood wells forth No surcease is found Pain is constant and alive Battering soul to the ground Can't go on like this Thoughts chaotic swirl around Carrying you away You turn and rend Feathers float on the air Pillow torn in two Nothing helps, what to do Screaming silent in the air Down in the pit No hope anywhere... Blackness of despair. Won't go on like this Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Peppermint35, this is a prickly write, I felt your anger and despair. Hope it's not real for you. Excellent writing! Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It was real at the time I wrote it, but things are better...poetry for me is better than any therapy I've ever found  Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I been there too...all of us have. Ron Tears, salted and bitter, well up and flow. Anger, a flame of rage, smolders and grows. Thoughts, flicker of betrayal, because your secrets, all will know. Time, As it trudges on, will allow these feeling to finally go |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Let it out!-- well done Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yes writing is a great form of therapy..and you have written your anger so well |
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