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Open Poetry #10

Ice-Blue Eyes

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

0 posted 2000-09-25 06:00 PM

Ice blue eyes,
look to see.
how much more anger
is there for me?
my lot in life,
no die is cast.
this anger boils
will it last.
One day,
two,
a month,
a week.
how long,
a respite
must I seek.
And I wonder,
Life?
how can this be,
for the name
Wife,
applies
not to me.
for who could
cast stones
at one meek
as I?
And it hurts
to be seen
by those
ice blue eyes.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 2000-09-27 12:14 PM

Welcome to Passions!!
This is sorrowful, and I can feel it flow right off the page. You've written the emotion well!

Hope to see more! Hope things get better too!

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 2000-09-27 12:31 PM

Seraphin - fine storlyline here - if you aren't Blue Eyes' wife, you ought not to ever consider it. Whatever it is now, it is going to be worse later. I like your approach to this subject.

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