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One Lone Star
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One Lone Star |
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AngelInBound New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 3 |
One Lone Star One lone star in the sky tonight sparkling gently up above a little silver glittered star casting down the spell of love. The night air so crisp and fresh the nature's sounds are all around one lone star in the sky tonight shines peace to me on the ground. The bats are fighting in the trees the crickets chirp their little song nature will soon silence to sleep but the one lone star shines all night long. The wolves may howl at midnight but the one lone star makes no sound just glistens in the sky til dawn then stays hidden til again nite comes around. There's one lone star in the sky tonight i wonder if it's an angels eye an angel sent to watch over me guide me thru life til it's time to die. Then i'll rise to the heavens above and i'll be the one watching over you just like the one lone star in the sky tonight i'll be the one to guide you thru. By Kellie Austin |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kellie- This is really beautiful. Really enjoyed reading this. A belated 'welcome' to you. Hope to see lots more from you.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written. enjoyed. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is lovely work Kellie...your imagery is marvellous... The bats are fighting in the trees the crickets chirp their little song nature will soon silence to sleep welcome! K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I really enjoyed this Angel, I agree with Severn, you have wonderful imagery, especially these line...... The bats are fighting in the trees the crickets chirp their little song nature will soon silence to sleep |
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