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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Unseen Within the shadows of the night Two eyes of love are burning bright Outshining moon and evening star And watching, wanting from afar As rising moonbeams slice the dark And passion yearns to strike a spark Two arms are waiting to embrace A lover in a distant place At midnight’s hour with starlit sky A heart is asking questions why With heartbeat pounding wildly To rhythms of the churning sea Somewhere a face reflecting glows Of moonlight on a night he knows He cannot have the love he seeks As tears of passion wet his cheeks In shadows on a night of bliss Two lips are waiting to be kissed A face that I will never find Just wild dreams within my mind There is no lover such as this There’s no one waiting to be kissed Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Liz, I could simply read you all morning long, my friend. The lyrical qualities in your work simply soothe my mind, and the sentiments ... just lovely. This is a shining example. Beautifully written.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Elizabeth....great work. I really enjoyed reading it. Alan |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how sweet and romantic... the desire in the night.. you have penned this with such a pasion, hope you will find your love some day. take care....Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Charismatic phrases of delight Wend their way on dreams of night Often unseen on morning dawned What waking thoughts on dreaming spawned *You STILL inspire me ! Thank you for this lovely penning. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Elizabeth, Lovely poem, and I hope one day it will be true for you. Best wishes Jon |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is so bittersweet Elizabeth...I love the way you weave! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
He's there!!! He has to be...perhaps the connection is growing stronger and coming closer even as we speak!!! This is sooooo very well written!!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Excellent writing. LOve Sy |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Someday, in a distant mist, A hand will reach out, draw you close, complete the kiss. Patience my dear, it will come for you, loved your poem. Ron |
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